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sail away
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Copyright: Sabrina Krawietz (sign) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 118] (821)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-25
Categories: Nature, Transportation
Camera: Canon PowerShot G3
Exposure: f/8, 1/1250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): sign in New Zealand [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-20 10:02
Viewed: 667
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this picture on our boat-tour to the hole in the rock in the bay of islands. It had been a lovely day and we saw some dolphins and penguins on our trip and this sailer in the distance.

When I took this picture, the settings of my camera were not good and the original one was blue. I tried to optimize the colours and the brightness and made a framing.

I hope it is not too bad. It would be nice, if you have some hinds for me, how to make it even better.
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To jan515: Hallo Januszsign 1 07-01 15:44
To jacojvr: Thanks Jacosign 1 07-01 15:42
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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3266 W: 267 N: 7731] (32972)
  • [2006-05-20 17:19]
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Hi Sabrina, I've been on the same trip as you to the Hole in the Rock. Great trip isn't it? And I will be going back there next December too.

You've got a good composition here with the land and the sea and you can still improve the dynamics by putting the horizon on 2/3 of the image. I have done a workshop for you.

I like the ripples of the water in the foreground. The sailing ship looks good too and the rocky headland is interesting.

Well shown, thank you,
Janice

Beautiful composition and saturation/ colours. needs a bit of sharpening
jaco

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2006-06-30 10:07]
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Hallo Sabrina,
Reine Farben, herrliche Arbeit guter Kontrast ich mag die Farben.
Gruß janusz

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-09-29 8:29]

Beautifully composed image with combination of blues i.e. dark in water and light in sky. Sailing a bot on the horrizon looks fabulous.

Thanks for sharing a nice picture.

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