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Walking Out To Sea


Walking Out To Sea
Photo Information
Copyright: Steven Parata (superaudio) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 236 W: 85 N: 177] (4530)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Action
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR A300, Tamron 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di-II LD As
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-03-16 0:26
Viewed: 200
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another photo taken at Mana Bay, stunning views for miles everywhere, so many scenes to take photos of, I ended up taking 150 + shots alone at the Bay.

This Rock Break Water / Pier is over 100 meters long, I walked almost to the end before the waves crashed over it and splashed me and sea spray wet the lens

There is Rock, Black Sand, Wood, Ship Wreck remains and more to feast your eyes and lens on
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To WhiteKnight: Thanks for the feedback......superaudio 3 03-17 11:53
To banaei: Thanks again :)superaudio 1 03-17 11:52
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To eosnut: Thanks for that Dad, I never knew that :)superaudio 1 03-16 02:14
To Dawn: You're exactly right.......superaudio 2 03-16 02:10
To Sharpshooter: Thanks for viewing and your feedback :)superaudio 1 03-16 02:02
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hello Steven
how are you?
wonderful view
lovely depth
great colours
nice light and exposure
fine dof
nice composition
TFs

regards
Manuj MEhta

Nice sweeping composition here Steven, good sharpness and nicely saturated colour..
I wonder if a crop of the sky to a more panoramic format would make a stronger image?

rgds
David

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3363] (17532)
  • [2009-03-16 0:51]
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Hi Steven, is this near Patea...I think I went to this beach last year, as I walked out on a thing like this right out into the water..it felt rather scary out near the end!

Good capture, with nice natural colours..and nicely composed.

Cheers
Dawn

Hi Steven,
Wonderful shot, Mana Bay looks like such a nice place to go. I'll have to add it to my list. The interesting patterns in the black sand on the right look very cool, love the composition you've used. An impressive photo.

Thanks alot for sharing,
Scott.

Hi Steven,

Nice lines leading in from the bottom left, the classic composition.
The structure is called a Groyne, they're built to keep the sand out of the channel, a bit of trivia for you.
Dad.

Steve,

Neat shot. Have you looked at the photo with almost half the sky removed? Really adds punch to the groyne and the black sand.

The little bright spots in certain areas of the sand are distracting.

Good composition.

Regards

Dennis

Hi Steven, now I can see the wispy clouds, stunning photo from a low pov and the composition is awesome. TFS

nice comp and POV
TFS

Hi Steven
Good capture, with nice natural colours..and nicely composed.
Nice lines leading in from the bottom left, the classic composition
**MAB**

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