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Walking The Groyne


Walking The Groyne
Photo Information
Copyright: Steven Parata (superaudio) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 236 W: 85 N: 177] (4530)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Decisive Moment, Action
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR A300, Tamron 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di-II LD As
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-17 1:40
Viewed: 221
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another photo at Mana Bay, this time nearly at the end of the 100+ meter Groyne
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To HapiSnapa: Ha ha that's what I tried to convey in photosuperaudio 1 03-18 16:35
To banaei: Thanks for the feedback MAB :)superaudio 1 03-17 11:51
To Dawn: I was trying to be arty lol, give the feel of beinsuperaudio 2 03-17 03:43
To Royaldevon: That was my idea, glad you're the first to ssuperaudio 1 03-17 02:37
To Sharpshooter: Thanks Scott............superaudio 1 03-17 02:06
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Hi Steven,
Interesting choice for the border. Looks like Mana Bay has got some good waves. I like the clarity and composition of this photo. Impressive shot.

TFS,
Scott.

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3363] (17532)
  • [2009-03-17 2:15]
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Hi Steven, Im even feeling a little scary looking at this, having been right there, I think its because of that stormy sea, and the uneven surface there, and walking right out into it..you have to watch where you step here...not too sure on the border/tilt thing..lol

Great natural colours... and nicely composed, thanks for sharing.

Cheers
Dawn

Hello Steven,

It took me a moment to realise why the photo seemed tilted when tht horizon was straight! It certainly gives the viewer a feeling of disorientation, as you might feel walking along such a precarious, wet footing above a pulsating sea. Original and effective.

Excellent textural details and sharp focus.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hi Steven
I like the clarity and composition of this photo. Impressive shot.
A fine beach shot showing the whole stretch of sandy beach belonging to you only.
Well done..
**MAB**

Steven, makes me nervous looking at your photo, very adventerous to go out that far, great colour and clarity all the same. TFS

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