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High & Dry


High & Dry
Photo Information
Copyright: Val Parmenter (parmenters) (141)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-01
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Panasonic FZ50, Lumix 0.7x, Hoya Polarised
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-27 22:08
Viewed: 247
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mapua Estuary , Waiting for the tide to come in
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Hello Val,

The boat is well placed for f/g interest and colour. Its orientation follows the waterline nicely.
I love the pastel shades in the sky which help to create an atmosphere of peace and tranquility.

A little more cropped from the sky would have helped composition and perhaps it could be a little sharper.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 3 N: 212] (2859)
  • [2009-01-28 19:42]

Hi Val,
A well composed shot and lovely tones in the sky but a couple of small tweaks could improve it. The boat is slightly unsharp and the tones in the sky need to be enhanced - maybe try sharpening it and adding more contrast in Photoshop or similar programme
cheers
Jack

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