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I'ts school holidays and I took the kids to MOTAT - the Museum of Transport and Technology. The museum houses lots of old vehicles and has hands on science exhibitions for children.
Here is an old style bus painted these wonderful colours to promote a childrens television progamme "What Now".
And here I am in the shiny hub. |
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OK, I'll start with the nit-pick: there's a small tilt to the right and top left corner should be clean. Now that it's out of my system, the rest of this image is quite good! Great composition, vibrant colour, and close enought that the subject becomes something else. See, it wasn't all that bad! Nice work!
Added to the "Reflected self portrait" theme. ;)
Almost ISOistic, but a bit too busy, especially the lower right corner. A tighter crop maybe?
Read all the above - agree with tournesol and attila and a tighter crop would do it. Having said that, I like it! Would be worth playing with some more to make it simpler?
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Bonjour Karen
Art deco era subject presented as a futurist painting!
Thanks for the respect of verticality and horizontality lines.
Quite eye catching!
Robert Deschênes
great composition. i love the color!
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Hi Karen,
Lovely photo a fantastic colour. We can see you on the shiny metal peace :) Great composition. Well done...