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Copyright: Karen Williamson (dorisday) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 53 N: 145] (2039)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon EOS 3000, 28-80, Kodak MAX 400
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-02-01 16:31
Viewed: 556
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
When you show a photograph to others you are baring a little peice of your soul, it's sometimes a brave thing to do.

Here is my daughter, who fortunately for me, loves to be in front of a camera. I took this as a series of portraits of her but I don't consider myself a portrait photographer so today I'm being brave in putting it 'out there'.

This is something I really need practice with so helpful hints and critiques are very welcome.

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hmmm...
beautiful pose and her look...
but the light is too strong and her face and colours looks not too good...
but very sweet and... litlle romantic...? :)
regard ewa :)

sure the light could be a bit softer but generaly i like when shots are overexposed, so it doesn´t distrubs me too much :) but the pose and the light perspective are really nice,
regards,
tashi.

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 165] (1728)
  • [2006-02-01 17:15]

tell you nice note ,,,, very much near to reality.
tell you ,by looking at this photo once cant say that you are not good at portrate.. you are good at portirate.
very nice composition,nice pose,cute little model..
thanks for sharing
love
Mugush

Hi m8

Just a quicky to say I like this picture

Im not a big fan of portraits but......this as you say bares a little bit of your soul... me included its hard for me to submit my image...but I feel I am with friends :-) so i have,
Lovely shot, love the dark background, the hard sunlight, and the look of a child loving her mother.

will take a bit more time over your other work over the next few days.... anyway well done ..

Ron

PS this takes you over the 500 so no more help from that Kit Bloke hahahahahahah well done

Hello Karen,

Interesting portrait, pretty girl, nice pose, I like the dark BG and the use of natural light. Like yourself and Ron above, I find it's a difficult move to display portraits to the world as everyone has their own ideas and views of what is and is not technically correct when it comes to portraits and it's sort of intimidating. Good effort.

Regards
Wayne

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  • SILVA Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (3917)
  • [2006-02-02 14:29]

what a sadness..very very good job..congrats

Hi karen, First I would say the composition is great. That is portrait is all about...getting an emotion portrayed and you did that very well. I would say that from a lighting perspective it is unfortunate that we can not see well the left side of her face. It is ok sometime to not see it but in this case I would say it would have been better to have more light on the left and a little less on the right.

Overall good shot.

Congrats on being brave!

TFS, Marie-José

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2110)
  • [2006-02-03 4:29]

I like the portrait. It is quite different from the regular child portraits that we used to seeing. Maybe the light from behind could be a litle softer, but the feeling of her being suspended in space is increased by that. The portrait is well-composed too. The directness of her gaze and the playful mischievous look is lovely.
She is a very pretty girl, Karen, who will become a very beautiful woman in the fullness of time.
Salil

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