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Copyright: Jack McGrane (jackal) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 3 N: 212] (2861)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Pentax K10D
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-08 7:37
Viewed: 567
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is from Waiake Beach on Auckland's North Shore.
The first shot was focused on the 'Thor' and the second on the filter.
I then spent hours trying to put them together.
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Great idea and very well executed!

Wish I had a focus filter like this one ;D

Cheers,
Jens

This is great idea!!

Nice shot.
Good PP work here on the surroundings, and clear inside the filter.

Great view.

Tom

Nice idea and great composition!
Very effective and impressive shot!:)
Best,
Izabela

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4021)
  • [2007-07-08 9:36]
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well,you really did a great job. the odea is very good and the composition is very good

Alexandra

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  • rio Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 134 W: 4 N: 64] (940)
  • [2007-07-08 11:23]

nice picture, jack. you really did great on the pp work! well done!

rio

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 971 W: 99 N: 2249] (11339)
  • [2007-07-08 14:54]
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Hi Jack,

What a nice idea! and it's really well performed, but..... you could have done an easier job by just selecting the areas outside the filter (and your fingers holding it) and blurring that area...
But ok... you chose to do it this way and I absolutely love the result!
Good work...

Cheers,
Anneke

P.s.: should you ever have any questions about using Photoshop.. don't hesitate to ask!

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 164 N: 1399] (10095)
  • [2007-07-08 16:45]
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G'day Jack,
You did a great job of an original idea.
Good on you for doing it, but Anneke is right, there are other more simpler ways to skin the cat.
I applaud you for the way you achieved the image...but one small detail.
Your horizon in the filter drops slightly right, while the blurred horizon tilts left. Both are an easy fix in PS.
Very well done.
Peter.

There may be easier ways to achieve the result but no were nearly as satisfying. Terrific result, a big congratulations is in order for having the patience to do it, and another for the result.
Diane

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 106 N: 560] (9574)
  • [2007-07-08 17:20]

Great Idea nice PP

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2007-07-08 17:37]
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Jack, this is excellent work.. good on you..I havent even mastered layers yet..

Top Marks for this one..great sharp view through the lens, nice beach Waiake.

Thanks for sharing..
Kia Ora
Dawn

Hi Jack
Congratulations on a job well done, there may be easier ways of doing it but I applaud you for trying. I wouldn't know where to start. Great idea with a Cool result.
Cheers Peter

Brilliant Photo Jack, it would look great as a cover of a Glossy Travel Brochure, well done :-)

Hello Jack,
great idea and good work. However I think the ships within the sharp part still look blurred due to movement and long exposure time. Maybe 1/500 at higher ISO would have helped.
TFS Thomas

Hello Jack.
Congratulations. The photo is fantastic. I like this idea.
The color are superb
Very good shot.
Regards.
Luis

Hi Jack,
what an original idea! The composition with the focused island is fantastic. Well done!
TFS,
Pawel

Very clever work Jack! You did a great job, it's seamless. Great idea delivered with compositional and technical finesse.
What a beauty!
Rew

Thanks for making the effort for the photo... the effect is awesome :-)
... I believe Waiake and the Tor have been looking very different the past few days with the storm you:ve had through...

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  • bzees Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 23] (366)
  • [2007-09-20 1:00]

Great idea on this shot. The finger in the shot really distorts the scale of this photo and I love it.

TFS.

Jack

You're the man of work and sacrifice!

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