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Autumn In The Avon


Autumn In The Avon
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Copyright: Renier Figuracion (kiwi_explorer) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 439 W: 19 N: 433] (2657)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05
Categories: Transportation
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-03 21:58
Viewed: 299
Points: 33
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the boatshed in Avon River where you can hire kayaks and also embark for the river punting tours. Avon River which flows through the center the city.
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  • Great 
  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1160 W: 15 N: 597] (10416)
  • [2008-05-03 22:16]

I always look forward to your postings, and this is very nice!! It must be a busy place. Once again a very beautiful b&w image. TFS

Nice autum or landscape.

  • Good 
  • c3101 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 97] (1185)
  • [2008-05-04 0:20]

Hi Renier

I like the black and white work, the the subject is interesting, but I feel the composition is not strong enough... my eye moves to the boats on the left because the tree branch leads it there, and the top bit with the foliage adds little to the image.

Hi Renier,
Very beautiful B/W picture great POV, sharp, details and reflection.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

hi Renier
a good POV with the tree as a frame. nice texture with the walls' reflections and leafs. splendid idea to post it B&W. beautiful photo.
tfs
tsilla

Hello Renier! Original work. Good lightness, very good sharpness. Interesting composition. Fantastic B&W effect. Good luck!

Hello Renier,
Amazing compo, graphism and reflection.
Choice of B and W works well here.
Selahattin E

Hello Renier.

So beautiful composition in black and white tones.
I like your perspective.


Sabina

Hi Renier,
Very beautiful composition and the B&W colours.
Excellent details. and reflections.
Well done.TFS.
greetings
H.Ayhan

You framed the kayaks very well Renier. Well composed. Colored will be nicer to see the colors of those kayaks:-)
Dennis

Hi Renier,

Beautifull composition..
Lovey tones in B/W.
Great results.

jp

Hello Renier!
Nice your point of view and lovely place!
I would like to see the colour version in WS...
Best regards!
Lili

  • Great 
  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 583 W: 52 N: 660] (4118)
  • [2008-05-04 12:39]

Hi Renier
Another excellent capture. I love those straight lines and nice arrangement of the boats, and at the top the tree creating a nice frame
Well done
Argiris

Hi Renier,
Another work of B&W autmn series, is very good.
POV, sharp, details and reflection very good.
Congratulations
TFS
Respectfully...

ergUn

  • Great 
  • budgun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 2 N: 331] (1761)
  • [2008-05-07 20:11]

Hi Renier,
Wonderful autumn scne with the peaceful river catching a striking reflection of the boat house and trees. Great lines to this neatly arranged kayaks. Beautiful clarity and sharp detaails to this peaceful autumn image.
Regards, Tom

Hi Renier,
I like all the different textures you have captured here.
Nice touch, using the tree to frame the kayaks, ramp and river, well seen.
Pete.

The compostion works for me Renier. Good control of the light and nice tones and textures. If I did have a beef then it would be a slight tilt. Another fine conversion,
David

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