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Sophia II


Sophia II
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Copyright: Rew Shearer (rewshearer) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4978 W: 348 N: 3636] (20984)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-03
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 400D/Rebel XTi, Canon EF 75-300mm 1:4-5.6 III, @ ISO 200
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/15 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Sophia [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-25 13:32
Viewed: 1057
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 76
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Well hopefully this one is a little better in terms of hair light and background?

Sophia again - a different look, and a totally different character. All it took was to ruffle her hair and lose the cardigan!

Halogen lighting using my usual setup.

PP - some adjustment of levels and background using layers. Resize, selective sharpening.

Sophia was excited to read the comments on her first photo but was anxious about this one because she thinks her face looks fat ...!!

mesquens1, mbrito, CyberMeritam, MLINES, dareco, jusninasirun, kiwi_explorer, hopalong, ravenvillareal, Masroor, tnahari, chrisJ, boonie, skot, budgun, puffy, ating76 has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To ating76: The portrait ...rewshearer 1 05-28 14:00
To puffy: Ethnicity ...rewshearer 1 05-28 01:56
To Teresat: Proud ...rewshearer 1 05-28 01:44
To skot: Missing critiques ...rewshearer 1 05-27 14:47
To zebulus: Sheepishness ...rewshearer 1 05-27 14:32
To crisgotiny: Cheers ...rewshearer 1 05-27 14:25
To budgun: Eyes ...rewshearer 1 05-27 14:20
To PierreCapoue: Smile ...rewshearer 1 05-27 00:25
To Janone: Ruffled hair ...rewshearer 1 05-27 00:22
To tjutjut: Lighting ...rewshearer 1 05-27 00:10
To nishantdavid: Lighting ...rewshearer 1 05-26 23:59
To MLINES: The bra strap ...rewshearer 1 05-26 23:50
To fotomek: The wardrobe ...rewshearer 1 05-26 12:39
To eosnut: Ah well ...rewshearer 1 05-26 12:35
To tnahari: Wow ...rewshearer 1 05-26 12:27
To Masroor: Environments ...rewshearer 1 05-26 03:20
To jusninasirun: Skin tone ...rewshearer 1 05-26 03:10
To gavindya: Hair lightrewshearer 1 05-26 03:02
To hopalong: Her face ...rewshearer 1 05-26 02:44
To kiwi_explorer: The look ...rewshearer 1 05-26 02:40
To timtim: Wow ...rewshearer 1 05-25 21:52
To wieyos: Skin tone ...rewshearer 1 05-25 20:54
To seethingsclear: Portrait ...rewshearer 1 05-25 20:45
To CyberMeritam: Portrait ...rewshearer 1 05-25 19:42
To mbrito: Composition ...rewshearer 1 05-25 19:27
To TripleT: The top ...rewshearer 1 05-25 18:54
To photophantom: The bra strap ...rewshearer 1 05-25 18:14
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Very good soft lights...skin tone is natural......kissable lips........the black bra strap is a little bit distracting unless it is a kind of style no question about it.......well done Rew.

Olá Rew,
What a great portrait from a nice girl.
Great control of light, sharpness and very good compo.
TFS
Raimundo

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1636 W: 118 N: 2818] (11368)
  • [2008-05-25 14:04]
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Hi Rew
Wonderful light and a very inteligent compo with a very successful «hear capture. The shine in the hair and the black line under the t-shirt are details that make a great diference.
Exvcelent work (as usual).
Best regards, mb
PS: Fat? Sophie? Oh my god... She has wonderful face.

Hi Rew,
I always like they way you play with the light.A wonderful portrait and my favorite in this fine gallery of a beautiful model.Wonderful and cheerful portrait.Great done mate.

Cyber Meritam

I can't imagine why she thinks her face looks fat. I guess I think mine looks fat in some photos too, so I can understand where she is coming from. Tell her no one thinks hers looks that way. I like the lighting and everything about it, but I WISH we could read what her tank top says!

Hi Rew
I find this photo beautifully simple and natural.
I like the eye contact here.
TFS
Yassine

you are right about the hair light, Rew.
the skin tone is very Oriental but natural. perhaps a little smile would make her looks sweeter. well done.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

wonderful High light on her hair rew.
Perfect. and also the lighting overall are perfect done. nice shadow on her hand and face, it's make a great dimension and characters for her hand and face. very well done my friend.

Rgds
Haldian

well done
spot on!

hello rew

very nice shot again
good soft lighting and dark bg
good impressions of your model

tfs

Hi Rew..beautiful shot...nicely composed with perfect light and tones.

Roger

Hi Rew,
This one is more of a seductive look ... wonderfully captured. Lighting and skin tones are also very good. Well composed and professionally taken. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

Hi Rew
Another lovey portrait, superb lighting ( as ever ) and lovely composition. Sophia is gorgeous and her face doesn't look fat in rainy England
Cheers
Pez

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2008-05-26 0:30]

A very pretty portrait. The lighting is great, as are the skin tones, etc. A beautiful girl!! Well done! TFS

Hello Rew. Looks like I am missing out a few beauties here. This one is well exposed with dark hair clearly isolated from the dark background. You'll have to teach me how to soften the skin tone without the use of soft filter. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

very nice lighting rew...and very magandang model...cheers!

tfs,
raven

Hi Rew,

This one is much considerable than the previous one. Her hair is revealed well. She still looks shy and very innocent. I believe her face is not fat. She looks pretty here. Good control of contrast and brightness. Well done my friend! TFS!

P.S. I suggest you to take some photos of Sophia besides an object. Outdoor shots or normal environments are recommended too. I believe you will get much better results.

Regards,
Masroor

hi Rew
fantastic portrait of a porcelain face. so delicate and calm expression. amazing eyes. the light on the face is perfect as the dark heir merges with bg.
regards
tsilla

Hi Rew,
Tell her she looks beautiful.
This looks and has the...what's the word? ambience? of being taken in Japan, not Meadowbank.
I bet you are pleased with the result.
Pete.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4250 W: 414 N: 6751] (42409)
  • [2008-05-26 3:49]

Hi Rew

A sensual portrait of this attractive female model, with superb dof, colour & sharpness. Tfs!

her underwear matches very well her hair :)
but I'd advise a t-shirt only... that would
be perfect! (hope I am not too demanding?)
regards - Tom

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1289 W: 69 N: 1538] (7679)
  • [2008-05-26 11:25]

You know Rew, the element that is most impressive about your work with your models is how well you capture their face and hair. Clarity, skin tones, expression, texture of her hair, her eyes, the touch of color on her cheeks - what is not to like.
Sophia, get over it, you face is NOT fat.

Dan

Hello rew

I just noticed that i thought that th dark background is better than the bright one in the portrait (maybe not for high key)

great portrait, nice light and peaceful pose

tfs

Olivier Dri

Oei, almost off grom the first page.!
Glad i didn't missed it Rew.
But, eh... never 'ruffle' the hair of a lady. That costed me ones a very dear friendschip.
Sophia, looks if she had no ploblem by winning the gold medal.
You got gold from me aswell Rew.
Cheers, Jan

splendid portrait, but finally, you are also very well supported by the model... :-)
A small smile would not hurt, and maybe a little dark lips.
The lighting is perfect, of course.

Realy a great portrait,
Thx fro sharing.

Trademark Rew Lighting and Pose, well done, tell Sophia the camera add's 10 pounds, so she must be tiny in real life. She has no worries at all about being fat. Ignore those airbrushed magazine covers Sophia, they are Not real. Great catalogue photo for her resume

Hi Rew,

You have 5 main lamp for this shot . . and I don't have such a great space at home fro doing this quality shot . . Is it possible just using one main light with several reflectors . . ?
I like the lighting setup to make highlights at the edges of her . .
I am thinking of having one softbox or umbrella and a reflector at the back . .
Quality may not good . . but try to learn basic things . .
I like this image . . her pose is lovely . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hi Rew, A lovely new model, with big dark eyes and good hairstyle. The setup and presentation are both good and flattering for her figure. Only thing which worris me (not too much) is the strap showing, but that may just mean i am old fashioned! Drats. TFS. Murray.

Hi Rew
Another masterpiece with PERFECT lighting.
Great POSE too.
TFS

smiley soon

Hi Rew,
Razor sharp details and clearity to this beautiful portrait. You bring a lovely softness to her beautiful face. Her large dark eyes have a dreamy look.
Regards, Tom

Wow she is really pretty, Her face is not fat but lovely. Very nice portrait of her with a different beauty in this shot.

cris

Yeah, I rather like this one alot better than the previous shot of her.

She dosent look as "sheepish", if you get me? I think just the pose, over all, is much more flattering, and kind of shows a bit of attitude, its not emotionless.

The other portrait was a bit sheepish looking and almost like she was scared, but this one makes her look more like a strong woman, with a bit of attitude, but not too much.

A very nice portrait!

Ill say this, I didnt care for portrait photography until I studied your work, now I almost want to try it myself!

TFS,

-zeb

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  • skot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 10 N: 73] (413)
  • [2008-05-27 14:05]
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Hey Rew,

Last night I wrote this long, detailed, and brilliant exposition on this photo and this morning it is missing. Well, maybe it wasn't that brilliant, but regardless, it's not here.

I think you did a much better job separating the model from her background here. I'm still amazed at how much a slight change can impact the final outcome of a photo.

That said, I think I prefer the jet-black background which, as has been noted, blends too much with her hair. I also prefer the more intimate, tight composition of the previous image.

I still give this one a super-smiley. I love your portraiture and look forward to your work.

Thanks,
skot

-- Fat face? I tire of female affectations. If she's confident enough to voluntarily stand in front of a photographer, she should not have to question her physical appearance. She's a gorgeous model and in the lens of a good photographer.

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 329 W: 2 N: 43] (2965)
  • [2008-05-27 14:41]

Hi Rew.Sophia is beautiful model and your picture is wonderful.
Best regards, Bosko.

Boa noite Rew

Your model is superb. She must be proud of her struture bone and genes. she is lovely. Maybe This photografic sessions will do it very well. I hope so.
I love you capture the attitude and bg. Delicious.

My regards

Teresat

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1792 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2008-05-28 0:20]
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She look very much like a Japanese girl to me, :D not sure why, but you have captured her very well here, I like the lighting setup here, bring out her nice colours skin, great face and black hair, :D Very nice contrast too. :P Excellent shot my dear,


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

Hi Rew,

This photo somehow stood out among all the thumbnails of your photo that I was viewing. Maybe it is the contrast of the model's white top with the dark BG. I do not know much about the technicalities of shooting the perfect portrait but I can see that the skin tones and lighting position is just how the eye should see it. I like the model too. She's beautiful.

TFS.

Regards,
Alvin

Hi Rew,
Nice portrait, colors and light are perfect
The subject is your partner and there is an excellent fusion between both
Well done

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