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RUSTinDOF


RUSTinDOF
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Copyright: Dawn McKenzie Wykes (Dawn) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-29
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Canon EOS 30D, Canon EF-S 17-85 f/4-5.6 IS USM, Heliopan UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-10-06 22:49
Viewed: 338
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
While staying in Manaia, South Taranaki, I was taking a look around my friends backyard. He has this old corrugated shed..(full of junk..lol..sorry Bill)..but a great photo op.. here I was playing around with DOF, and thought this was an eyecatching photo.. what do YOU think?
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To iso: thank uDawn 1 10-09 03:59
To pozaru: thank YOUDawn 1 10-07 00:50
To Hendrika: thanks ElsDawn 1 10-07 00:01
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Beautiful image Dawn... very artistic. Great composition and colour.

Regards Mark :)

I like it and I've played a bit.
See WS, hope you don't mind.

v
ps.I think that a big poster would look superb

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2008-10-07 0:23]

Yes, I like the colours - trust you to go looking at rusty buildings!!

The lines are good, and the patterns have some lovely colours and although it is OOF it is still recognisable for what it is.

The small patch of in-focus shows good details.

Good one MF
Janice

Hi Dawn. Very good shot in shallow depth. The focused area exposing details of the rusty corrugated sheet with fine details. Nice perspective and good framing and have to agree with Els on Dof for repeated perspective. Regards. Jusni

Hi Dawn,

Yes and no - that does not help you much.

You liked this effect and I probably would have liked the F22 effect more. Rust is eye catching indeed and the textures provide you with a warm abstract.

TFS
Els

Have to add a translation to your title
the dutch word RUST means REST in english
the dutch word DOF means a texture not brilliant but more dusty.

Hi Dawn,

Without reading your note, I thought was trees . .
It's a beautiful presentation . .
Lovely highlights and shadows here . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2008-10-07 7:45]

It is really eyecatching Dawn, it seems to glow with an inside light. You did very well on the DOF too. First time I have seen a corrugated sheet with pink color!

Andre'

hi dawn, i like it a lot because i love selective depth of field!, the colors and textures are nice too,
tfs,
scott

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27859)
  • [2008-10-08 5:04]
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I liked this one for the special tones and the technic.

Iso,

Nice! Definitely a good photo op, and an intriguing POV with excellent use of light, colour, and texture. I like this.

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