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Amanda


Amanda
Photo Information
Copyright: Hartanto Tan (agetan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 74 W: 51 N: 145] (1586)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-05
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed], Portrait
Camera: Minolta Dynax 7D, Minolta 80-200 f2.8, Digital ISO 200
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-06-06 19:29
Viewed: 595
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I have a great opportunity to work with this gorgeous lady for portrait.

It was freezing and windy... but she is really professional...

I enjoy working with her.

Here I use shallow depth of field to isolate the subject. Using her hand as leading line...

Added diffuse glow in Photoshop.

This is one of my favorites from all the shots...
the rest can be found at www.pbase.com/hartanto_tan/amanda

Hope you like it...

Any comment and critique are welcome...


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Hello! I like this picture, but i have one question. What focal length was your lens set to? I looks like it was a little too wide angle for this shot--maybe try zooming in a little more. It will bring your subject into the frame without causing as much distortion or unnatural enlarging of the foremost parts of the person being photographed. My only complaint with this photo is the crop; i would not recommend cropping off the top of Amanda's head because it just makes the photograph feel incomplete. I like your contrast, as well as the good color saturation (strong, but not unnatural), and the just overall nice tonal range of the photo. Congratulations on a great photograph!

-Kyle

Very nice! The girl is beatiful! Great lighting and composition. Great job! JP

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