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2 years later


2 years later
Photo Information
Copyright: Natalia Revila (nataliar1980) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 67 W: 9 N: 12] (934)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-09
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/4.2, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): photos of Urfaust favorite TL members, TL Beautiful, Sensual Shots [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-11-09 13:31
Viewed: 909
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is a selfportrait, like my fisrt posted here before but 2008 version :)
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very beutiful shot! i liked the colours.

  • Good 
  • Rusty1 (77)
  • [2008-11-09 14:09]

A daring self portrait. I like the soft tone of the lighting but some bright areas like on the shoulder that seems to have been blown out by the use of a flash. But there is some discoloration in the image on the right top area of the image.

Well done for the self portrait...I know that they are not easy to do!

The only bit I don't like is the hair coming over the lip.

regards
Tracey

  • Great 
  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2008-11-10 0:02]

I wonder why so little appreciation of this exceptionall well done self-portrait ... so eloquent in it's sensuality ... the discoloration can be taken care of ... but it's also a very human photograph ... not oneof those plasticized semi-nudes.

Hi Natalia ! A good idea to re-do that sensual self-portrait. The hair seems a little shorter :-) The first one was very nice, but a think I prefer your look on this one. Well done. Looking forward to see the 2010 version ;-) Ciao ! Dany :-)

Hi Natalia..this is a nicely composed shot..nice details and light...good work.

Roger

Hello Natalia,

2 years after, but always also beautiful and sensual. But, it is damage that the grain and contrasts on the skin are not softer.
Cheer, all the same for this daring self-portrait !

Regards
Laurent

Me gusta la atmósfera de la imagen, buena iluminación, y me gusto el encuadre que le diste... saludos... buen autoretrato en verdad...

Natalia,

Beautiful photo of an obviously beautiful woman. :) i do agree with rusty that some aspects of the photo could be edited. i took advantage of the situation and posted a workshop. i kept with the slight sepia tone that you originally had. hope you like.

- brad

  • Great 
  • hama Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 164 W: 0 N: 68] (1257)
  • [2008-11-12 3:41]

Well done friend,, exposing oneself is a very ough job but you have manged it well. The only thing in the shot is that the skin tones are not so perfect, it is because of the contrast control I believe. Any way I love the way you tried to shoot a self portrait.

Sarwar

  • Great 
  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1385 W: 0 N: 1687] (13645)
  • [2008-11-16 3:59]

Good posing and camera control Natalia,looks very erotic indeed,I would be proud of you.
jan

Hay demasiado fondo pero una foto muy dramático. Gracias por enseñarla. Claro que eres hermosa, pero tienes habilidad con la luz romántica también.

ciao Natalia
what can i say about this SP?!?.. everything could look so superficial..
it's lovely.. intriguing and sensual...
as only a woman could be..
it's beautiful..
as you are so beautiful for me..
excellent and cool post!.. my compliments
ciao Marco

Isa !

Felicitaciones por los dos años y por la bella foto.Publique un workshpo que espero que te guste

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