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- kfreud
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Hi Natalia,
she really looks lost in this picture,
but also the picture misses a focus
best
Karl
Hi Natalia. The idea of your shot was good at first. But I agree with Karl. A closer shot of your model would have been better (In my opinion) I tryied a little worshop. Tell me what you think. Cheers ! Dany :-)
hola, creo que mas un tema de crop, quizas hubiera ubicado "la modelo" en otro lugar de la foto y me parece que te quedò un poco oscura. saludos. martin
Hola natalia!, linda la idea y la modelo... pero dos cosas;
primero, le cortaste el pie a la modelo.
Segundo, tendrías que haber "recortado" el portero electrico.
Igualmente,
Bravo
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It's a good idea. Your subject's expression, pose, and clothing all suggest a real sense of vulnerability, I even feel cold on her behalf!
However I don't think the composition or POV quite does this justice - especially the table and mirror on the left, as they're poorly cropped. Also your subject's toes are touching the bottom of the frame, which isn't ideal.
I do think you have used the size of the doorway well though to emphasise her smallness.
Rew