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• Aida (2228)
• [2007-05-05 17:18]

Hi Claudio,
Nice compo in this photo. I like how her face is hidden and the shadows from her arms. Its just a pity that the white isn't more bright to create a stronger contrast.
TFS,
Aida

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• renatombat (549)
• [2007-05-05 17:56]
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Hola Claudio

Me gusta la pose de la bailarina y la luz proveniente a espaldas de ella, pero noto la toma un poco oscura (no se si es problema de mi monitor. Hice un pequeño workshop espero que no te moleste y que te guste.
Renato

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-05-05 18:34]

Very beautiful in black and white. I like the way the shadows fall across to obscure the torso, arms, and body. A little more light hitting her face to show its contours and form would have helped to give the shot more continuity and impact, IMO. Nice black background to make her pop out, and to give a sense of mystery, or at least a lack of context. The pose is wonderful and I like the way she is cropped up to the skirt. Renato's workshop I think sums up what could be improved in the shot (the lack of contrast and the amount of negative space at the left and top). Beautiful and expressive though, TFS!
-Lara

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• Pioforsky (1693)
• [2007-06-03 12:40]
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¡Hola Claudio!
Pues a mi me gusta mucho así como está ;)
Con esa media luz, tan tenue que deja solo intuir las formas. De verdad me encantó. Un momento exquisito.
Un saludo para Argentina
Edén