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My Yellow Window


My Yellow Window
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Copyright: Maryori Munoz (colombiana) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 26] (198)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-10
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-09-21 20:49
Viewed: 375
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
La Boca is one of the most colorful barrios in Buenos Aires. Its brightly colored buildings give the area a very festive appearance.
Italian immigrants were the first settlers of La Boca, and the working class neighborhood was Buenos Aires' first port. Today the buildings in the barrio are painted in bright colors. We wandered down the famous pedestrian street of La Caminito, which was named for a popular tango song. Many local artists were selling their wares, while others danced the tango for the many visitors. (source: About.com)

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merhaba dear maryori
wonderful lovely window and lovely colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

very artistic composition
lovely colors
tfs

Hi Maryori,
Good observation of those colours side by side. Your main subject is well chosen in that context. But the other decoration on the bottom right side shouldn't be there or it should by entirely, but, IMO, not cut like that. I made a little WS to see what it can be in another composition.
TFS,
Ivan

Original composition with nice colours !
Jean

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2016 W: 144 N: 3390] (13589)
  • [2008-09-24 1:50]

hi Maryori

That is small window out of the big wall but you have observed the yellow out of the frames of green, red, white and blue walls. IMO, perhaps you probably could make this capture more dynamic by lowering the angle to frame fully the brown box at bottom and the yellow window slightly higher by 1 inch. What do you think? And of course straighten out that vertical line by cropping the right edge as parallel to the border.

tfs, bill

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  • Luighi (79)
  • [2008-10-11 9:23]
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Querida amiga Maryori, una buena y original composicion , aunque deberias haber tratado de que la linea vertical quedara mas recta y que la ventana de la parte de abajo no saliera para darle un toque mas minimalista .Bien hecho de todas forms.
Saludos desde Valencia.

Luis

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2008-10-24 13:54]

I really like this one, Maryori, for it's minimal mood and the great geometry it has. Well framed in a nice color assortment
TFS
Argiris

hello Maryori,
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c'est très coloré, et très bien observé, j'aime beaucoup !!!
Bonne soirée
marie

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