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beach


beach
Photo Information
Copyright: Jack Mottaz (Jack_Emmanuel) (88)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-06-03 7:38
Viewed: 697
Points: 3
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fin de journée à la plage
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hi, nice pov but there is a bit focus problem and some composition problem.i did a workshop, take a look

Hello Jack and welcome to TL. This is a very beautiful looking beach and a great looking model. I think the subject is a little to central in the image though and the focus on the model is a bit soft. I really like the overall feel of this, the beautiful scene and long shadows. I have done a bit of a workshop on this and hope you do not mind.

Cheers
Wayne

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