Waterfall of the Smoke

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• bhobot (1924)
• [2008-12-16 3:11]

amazing shot viviane

i like the misty foggy of the waterfalls.
god point of view

keep on posting

best regards

bhot

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• maecy (1641)
• [2008-12-16 3:26]

Hi Viviane!

Wonderful shot! Really glad you showed this to everyone..Its a grand shot! wonderful creation.

Thanks for sharing..

Regards,

Mae

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• bupga (2711)
• [2008-12-16 4:36]
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Hi Viviane,

I personally not convince to the two comments given earlier. Agreed! we have our own point of view but I freferable give you an honest critique that maybe can help you in the future. First of all the composition is lack of interest(IMO). Why? the pov is not interesting am sure your subject here is water
falls not sure how did you captured it either by vertical format or horizontal (just because of cropping). I preferable shot it in vertical format, if it is in horizontal I would have go further and include other elements in foreground like rocks, grass, trees or whatever to balance the composition. The exposure is good as I can see it in the water but other parts of the image is dark. The sky in the left top is white compare to blue in the right. Sorry same as you am also in the process of learning but what I've said maybe can help. Nothing personal.


Regards........Buddy

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• bucanas (15276)
• [2008-12-16 12:28]
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Ola Viviane,
Muito bonita essa cascata,bonito lugar.
Fiz um WS,o que voce acha?
Abracos,
Ralf

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• Niva (10531)
• [2008-12-17 5:52]

Fôrça e beleza! Sim, a água!
Bonito espetáculo, Viviane.
Obrigado por compartilhar.
Um abraço,
Nivaldo