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SO SIMPLE


SO SIMPLE
Photo Information
Copyright: Viviane Tavares (viviane_depaula) Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 13] (109)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-25 18:34
Viewed: 227
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
I love to walk by the sidewalk
To see the animals to roll in the grass
To see the laughter in the face of children
Swimming in the warm nights of summer
Listen to the song of birds in flight
Chatting with friends at the gate
Misses me with a handshake
Play conversation outside with my brothers
Observe the peace of couples love
Yokel eat chicken and rice with beans
Read a good book, hear a beautiful song
Also read poems filled with inspiration
And if there is nothing more to do
Staying at home, watching television.
Simple as that. Without complication.

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2670 W: 1567 N: 5137] (18585)
  • [2009-04-25 18:44]
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Boa noite Viviane,

Um belo retrato em P&B, feito a partir de uma perspectiva pouco utilizada, mas excelente.
Uma linda moça (É vocÊ?).
Parabéns e um grande abraço,
Sergio

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 2 N: 838] (10297)
  • [2009-04-25 18:57]
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Quanta "simplicidade", quanta beleza!
Parabéns, Viviane!
E o(a) autor(a)do texto?
Um abraço,
Nivaldo

Viviane,
Sua composicao ficou muito boa, com o balanceamento entre face e cabelo na distribuicao no quadro. Talvez a face e corpo estejam um pouco super-expostos, mas desta forma deixam uma nevoa (luz espirrada) que faz parte da personalidade da foto.
Sugiro que voce desfoque o pouco que se ve de uma parede no canto superior esquerdo.
Bom domingo,
Wellington

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