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White, red and shadows


White, red and shadows
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Copyright: raimundo mesquita (mesquens1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1200 W: 94 N: 725] (17057)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-28
Categories: Artwork, Experimental, Macro, Abstract
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC LZ7
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Red all over the world, 50 points and more [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-29 2:58
Viewed: 224
Points: 54
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
This is an "ornament" made by American artist Marion Tarasuk, 1970 for the MOMA of New York and edited as Greetings card.
Mine contribution? To open at this POV to obtain the posted angle, shape and shadows. Croped, framed and resized to TL
Have a good week.

chendis, cunejo200, daisydaisy, manujmehta, fransx, Juliet, mvdisco, harpya, mistic, Teresat, kanton, norenastramus, isa, Fortuna, karith has marked this note useful
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HI Raimundo
grate capture
amazing shapes and shadows
the withe bg is suitable
Grate work!

Kind regards,
Oana

Cioa Raimundo,
A very artistic and pretty artwork. Red and white make such good color combo. The high key treatment is attractive. Best regards...
Danilo

Excellente idée !
j'aime le concept.
Une création très attractive et..... folle , c'est ça l'Art.

Félicitations

hello raimundo
how are you?
wonderful shot with rich red
good subject and informative note
like the composition
thanks for sharing

regards
Manuj MEhta

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3555 W: 736 N: 2391] (18990)
  • [2009-06-29 3:13]

Very eye carhcing artwork !
I like it; thanks.

v

Hi Raimundo,
A nice graphical composition with these spherical shapes!
Nice lighting and a fabulous POV to keep good symmetry in the whole depth!
Nice colors and shadows!
A modern approach of photographic art!
A very eye-catchng composition!
Well done,

Francis Xavier

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 875 W: 64 N: 1969] (13538)
  • [2009-06-29 3:46]

Hi Raimundo,
FANTASTIC-- excellent POV and lines you show on this ornament. Nicely done- and quite beautiful. LOVE THE RED AND WHITE ! TFS Julie

Bonjour Raimondo,
Excellent pointde vue et perpective,
Jolies couleurs et détails,
beau travail d'artiste et composition,
belle netteté pour une ouverture à 2.8,
tous mes compliments
Michel

Ciao Raimundo



Tua cor favorita!
num belo abstrato de rara beleza.
eu gosto da luz, das sombras e detalhes
que teu ornamento deixa no trabalho.
De bom gosto e afiado compo!
Saudações,

Sergio

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1268 W: 0 N: 2483] (20320)
  • [2009-06-29 7:24]

Hello,

mangigique image, quel effet, cett spirale est de toute beauté, quel effet ce rouge et blanc, grandiose.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

Ciao Raimundo, elegant abstract composition with fantastic graphic, very well done, ciao Silvio

Grande olhar, mestre Raimundo! Criativo e de bom gosto.
Bela composição com uma ótima combinação de cores.
Meus parabéns, caro conterrâneo.

Abraço,
Bruno

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 38 N: 1262] (4336)
  • [2009-06-29 8:35]

Hi Raimundo

I like the graphics here a lot, and
the striking red color, very creative and
attractive artwork with nice colors combination
and idea is really original.. superb POV and a great
shot with artistic approach..

tfs and regards
suzy

j'aime Raimundo le soin de vos clichés et l'humour aussi de ci delà,

bravo et merci à vous,

amitiés,

dd, ile de la Réunion

salut raimundo

superbe sujet que celui-ci il donne de beaux jeux d'ombres et de lumières, les contrastes sont étonnant
beau concept
passe une bonne journée

Boa tarde Raimundo
Boa brincadeira com este sujeito da MOMA.
A imaginação a brilhar. parabéns.
Um abraço
Teresa

Hi Raimundo,
Excellent contrast and sharpness. The crop works fine too. You show here how beautiful simple objects can be. Fine example of photographic art!
Hans

Crisp and eyecatching capture - with interesting geometry, colour, and light. The contrast of the red spirals with the strong white of the background exposure is key to this photo's success.
Rew

Hello Raimundo,
Simple, but
creative idea.
Good relisation...
TFS
selahattin E

Raimundo
Belle photo, graphique et colorée, au cadrage original.
Amicalement
JJ

Hi Raimundo!
Eye catching and artistic compo!
with nice colours,graphism and
an interesting informative note!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

Ola Raimundo
Excellent idea and artistic artwork.
very beautiful RW colours and details.
TFS.Greetings
H.Ayhan

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  • isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 353 W: 50 N: 691] (4087)
  • [2009-06-30 2:31]

OLá Raimundo,
Bela perspectiva, escolheu muito bem o ângulo do disparo. Interessante ornamento. Excelente iluminação e o vermelho intenso, muitas vezes difíil de conseguir numa fotografia. Bonito contraste.
Parabéns.

Um abraço.
Isa

Hi Raimundo,
Very beautiful experimental shot vith good colours and graphism.TFS.
Abraço

hAyAti

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 424 W: 163 N: 310] (2025)
  • [2009-06-30 5:57]

Oi amigo Raimundo

impecável apresentação deste simples "ornamento" como vc o chamou.
Acredito perfeitas as curvas e posicionamento que possibilitaram esta sua composição...
Gostei tb que toda a peça ficou em foco, além da bela cor vermelha no fundo claro..

TFS
abraço;
Taba

Irmão,

Poderia escrever mais.
Prefiro, no entantto, ser sucinto.
DIVINA COMPOSIÇÃO.
Grande abraço,
Sergio

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  • karith Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1067 W: 80 N: 1171] (7409)
  • [2009-07-06 22:04]

Red is always eye-catching, and the red-white contrasts here work wonders with the spiral shape, lines, and light. Simple and strong, with a sense of fun and creativity. Excellent!

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20268)
  • [2009-07-06 23:01]

Hi Raimundo,
great creative work again.Beautiful contrast between red and white.Congratulations.Necla.

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