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Parallels
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Copyright: raimundo mesquita (mesquens1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1224 W: 97 N: 755] (17397)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-19
Categories: Experimental, Macro, Abstract
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC LZ7
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/200 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-26 3:13
Viewed: 161
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
A minimalistic idea from infinity, or, more simply, an experiment from DOF.
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Hi Raimundo,
Indeed an excellent example of minimalism. Perfect shallow DOF. The off-set(not centred) POV makes me think. A fine artistic impression of the strings of a guitar.
Hans

Always good to show how DOF works and what it can be used for. Nice idea, very simple and good abstract.

David

Good to show how DOF works and what it can be used for. Nice idea, very simple and good abstract.

Khawar

Hi Raimundo
Excelent minimalist compo,really effective with nice DOF...
Love it:)
regards
Mitko:)

Hi Raimundo,
A marvelous perspective from this POV.
A great use of shallow DOF.
Nice symmetry created in this minimal composition.
Wonderful contre-jour presentation with fabulous light on the strings of the guitar.
An artistic presentation!
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hello, Raimundo -
Wonderful minimalist graphic composition - guitars provide so much opportunity for great images. The subtle lighting and perfect DOF make this image special. Very well conceived and captured.

Ciao Raimundo



Excelente minimalistica!
A principio eu pensei ser o braço
do violão onde estão os trastes (as cordas). É ou não?
Um bonito e grande uso do DOF baixo,
bem definido e criativo,
Grande composição e apresentação agradável.
Saudações my friend...

Sergio

this is an original idea. very nice.

jaime

Hi Raimundo,
Good idea and excellent details...
Depth and perspective are sharpnes.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

A very effective one, too. I like the composition of this although the lead-in from the lower-right corner could have been better. The light is excellent and the clarity of the nylon strings particularly is very pleasing.
Rew

Olá Raimundo

Ótima experiência, grande resultado!
Boa idéia, um trabalho muito bom.
Meus parabéns, gosto muito.
GA
Vera.

Great perspective Raimundo .. love the rich warm dark brown tones of the wood, and also the visible texture.
I agree with Rew ... I would have liked to see the lead in from the bottom right corner as well, just to make it perfectly symmetrical.
great job
Trudy

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2009-09-26 18:08]

Hi Raimundo,
This is a great idea to take a guitar for a studdy on perspective. Excellent DOF emphasizing the impression of infinity. The gray and brown tones compose a beautiful and modern colored harmony. Bravo! Annie

Interesting idea well carried out. I thnk I may have used a black border to add a little contrast and highlight the shot a bit more but thats personal preference. TFS
warm regards
David

Ola Raimundo! Superb strings. Amazing POV and composition. Perfect focus. Original shot. Saude!

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 412 N: 2987] (32833)
  • [2009-09-28 0:53]

selam Raimundo...
ne kadar güzel parelel detaylar selamlar

C'est parfait Raimundo.
Excellent résultat. Ces parallèles donnent le vertige.
Minimalistic and artistic = fantastic !
On dirait le manche d'une guitare.

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