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Outro Girassol


Outro Girassol
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Copyright: Vera Scharan (Scharan2) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 60 N: 813] (4857)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-27
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-26 13:14
Viewed: 209
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Outros Girassóis

despencam dos meus olhos
estrelas frias
e dos meus poros vertem
chuvas temporais

sopram da minha boca
brisas ligeiras
e cantos breves
de pássaros marginais

sóis brotam
de dentro do meu peito
e nascem girassóis
no céu da minha boca

correm nas minhas veias
lágrimas de sal e mel
vindas de dentro do coração

vulcões povoam
minha mente calcária
que explode em versos

lavas que queimam
a frágil folha branca
da minha alma

sou puro caos
poeta sou e canto
a canção dos aflitos
que não sabem cantar

despencam dores
rebrotam esperanças
e em palavras florescem
outros girassóis.


Nídia Bonetti.
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Abraços a todos.

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  • Great 
  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 756 W: 58 N: 1111] (8915)
  • [2009-09-26 13:36]

Hi Vera,
An unusual capture of the sunflower in this matter!
A rather decayed flower but fantastically captured as if hiding behind the big leaf!
Fabulous lighting and accurate focusing with a marvelous contrast to the light blue sky.
Framed in an adequate frame to give life to the old flower!
Good work and neat presentation.
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Ciao Vera, fascinating sunflower with fantastic colors, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Olá Vera
Wonderful capture and sunflower
Light, colors and perspective are great
Thanks
BURAK

Hi Vera,
Nice off centre composition, vivivd colors and nice frame...Text is a bit distracting for my taste.. anyway I like your shot.
TFS
Selahattin E

Que luz, Vera!
Bom texto de apoio. Cores e contrastes quentes, voa definição da imagem.
Bom domingo,
Raimundo

  • Great 
  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1358 W: 0 N: 2685] (21313)
  • [2009-09-27 2:58]

Hello,

superbe tourne-sol, très bien capté et mis en évidnece avc la feuille vert, mangigique iamge, ce ciel pur et limpide, grandiose.

merci et amitié

Nicou

  • Great 
  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 282 W: 0 N: 287] (1866)
  • [2009-09-27 13:35]

Hi Vera,
Very nice composition with splendid colours.
Great focus with fine details.
Fabulous light and contrast of the flower on the blue background. Excellent POV.
Ciao.Vanda

Hi Vera,
Beautiful sunflower with amazing colors ,
Excellent POV. and details.
good contrast and light,
well done.
Michel

Hi Vera,
An unusual sunflower shot and its pretty details..
Blue sky at background is sharpness. I love it.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hi Vera!
wonderful sunflower, and amazing composition...
the pov is perfect, making the blue sky a wonderful background...
very nice sharpness and light...great framing...
tfs
regards,
Alper
P.S. sorry, i don't have anymore points left for today, otherwise i'd be happy to reward this photo with 2 points...

Ola Vera,

Wow, what a superb capture of the sunflower with perfect blue sky in the BG! I like the great contrast between the blue colored sky and the golden yellow flower, it is simply awesome. The sharpness and POV are great and this composition is a great one.
Well done, my friend!

thanks and regards,
Paras

PS: Sorry, I have no points left for today :(

  • Great 
  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1163 W: 2 N: 845] (10677)
  • [2009-09-28 19:13]

Olá Vera
Uma linda flor, o girassol, uma bela apresentação!
Grande abraço,
Nivaldo

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5763 W: 198 N: 2582] (10130)
  • [2009-09-29 14:01]

Ciao Vera,


Bonito tiro, de bonitas cores e detalhes!
Um bom Bg azul e uma forte luz a deixa deslumbrante.
Fino detalhes nas pétalas e folha, as cores são bem reproduzidos ...
Uma composição agradável, com uma sensação dinâmica!

Saudações,

Sergio

  • Great 
  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2660 W: 74 N: 4764] (21701)
  • [2009-09-29 15:18]

Hi Vera...

Excellent shot of wild nature - perfect angle and sky for b/g..!
Beautiful view -Nice colors, details and lighting.
The PS works and framing of this photo makes it to look well.
Best regards,
George

  • Great 
  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 0 N: 958] (4614)
  • [2009-10-02 3:50]

Hi Vera,
really a captivating shot of the pretty flower.
I like your compositrion of simple but exciting colours. the yellow sunflower stands out beautifully against the soft blue sky.
excellent skills.

regards,
Foozi

Hi Vera...nicely composed shot...nice tones and details.

Roger

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