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Run, Lola, run!


Run, Lola, run!
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Copyright: Carmem A Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 71 N: 222] (2527)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-17
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Elan 7, Sigma 28-200, Fuji Superia 200
Exposure: f/5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): FILM TITLES [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-23 17:00
Viewed: 1056
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Still trying my new Elan.
Taken at Villa Lobos park, in a hot summer afternoon.


Scanned from negative, as usually.
All critiques are welcome.
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This is beautiful...The softness of the background contrasted with the sharpness of her motions, especially with the water bottle and blue shorts and hair. This is quite magic.
My only complaint is perhaps the emptiness of the right, only because she is not quite on a definitive part of the photograph [somewhere between the 1/3 and the 1/2] which takes the focus off her and to the grass a bit.
It's tricky, because putting her more to the left [what I would naturally do if cropping, I think] would cut out the swing, which you don't want.] Hm. I'll come back and look at this later.
Thank you for posting.
Kate.

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2006-01-23 23:50]
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Muito boa composição... a câmera também!
Lugar certo no momento certo.
Como sempre: um bom trabalho!
('tamos aprendendo!)He... He...
Abraço
Reynaldo

Bela fotografia Carmem,

ficou perfeita com o tema, aliás eu ví este filme e como ela passa o tempo todo correndo, esta aqui está perfeita.
Parabens pela criatividade e foto.
Grande trabalho aqui!

Sergio

ADOREI esta foto !! mas não gostei a alusão com o filme porque esta menina parece tão inocente !

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