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Lua


Lua
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Copyright: Carmem A Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 71 N: 222] (2527)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-27
Categories: Daily Life, Pets, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/6.8, 1/11 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Theme(s): My cats [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-30 11:29
Viewed: 1112
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My new kitten, Lua.
She's so lovely!
My first raw experience.
Light: available.
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Since you've asked for, I went back to .raw original file, and started editing again:
-added vignete;
- changed temperature color;
-increased blues;
- opened.. and added some render lighting omni effect on Lua's face;
-ran bg with NI;
-touched with sponge, dodge, and burn tools.

Framed as usually.
All critiques are always welcome.
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Much better Carman. Her other eye is so much more visible. What a cute kitten. Take good care of her and love her all the time. I think it was well worth the effort to work on this portrait again.

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2006-01-30 12:29]

Super portrait - lovely result and good note. TFS

The vignetting gives personality to the picture, but the light lacking on the left handside is still a bit of a downside. Good effort though.

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2006-01-30 20:53]

Que linda...!!!! Muito bem fotografada. ótimo que você encontrou a Lua, ela é muito bonita!
Muito boa composição.
TFS
Reynaldo

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  • maira Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 109 W: 14 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-02-01 14:39]

A gata é maravilhosa e a foto ótima, mas não poderia deixar que ficasse com ponto impar. Bom trabalho.

Hi Carmen
nice cat. :o)
A negative point: you cut one of his ear. :o(
You will see, Raw is very powerful.

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2006-03-24 12:24]

A beautiful photo of a beautiful cat. It is just a pity that the dark area on the left seems a bit noisy, apart from this, the quality is excellent. Nice product.

Ooooh she is realy sooo lovely.
Very nice photo I like the lightnes very much.

Bom dia Carmem
Fotografia altamente hipnotizante.
Não é a toa que esses felinos eram animais sagrados.
Só tenho que agradecer por nos presentear com tão bela imagem.

Paz e Luz
Carlos Eduardo

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