Boat

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-01-16 12:44]

Great bright colors and I love the POV. The boat is really awesome with all the pointy angles. The texture and pattern of the floor at the bottom is wonderful and makes for a great contrast against the muddy, wavy water. Good lighting too. May I suggest cropping all around to get rid of the pipe at the top, the distracting dark wall at the bottom right, and just a slives off the left side and bottom to bring focus to the bright boat in the water while getting the wonderful tiled floor in there. Just my two cents, great idea and very nice photo. Thanks for sharing!
-Lara

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• sorin_m (689)
• [2007-10-12 6:33]

hi Paula.
i like the high pov and the colors of the boat-well seen.
but imo the pipe should not be in the shot.
thank you.
sorin