Gemima e Aldo

Critiques [Translate]

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• rewshearer (20595)
• [2007-05-06 23:32]
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You know I'll be honest, even if it disgruntles you ... and in this instance I don't think it's up to the standard of recent portraits you've delivered.
The wide separation of the two subjects makes this a kind of non-portrait, there's no real connection between them, and the placement of - and light shining on - the chair towards the right-hand 1/3rd of the frame makes it the default subject of this shot. Combine that with the brightly overexposed area top-left, and ... heck, I'm sorry, this isn't good reading, is it?
Having said all that, I do like the POV from which you took Gemima's portrait, down at her eye level, and her placement in the frame - it has the seed of a great shot here.
TFS
Rew

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• gavindya (1102)
• [2007-05-07 0:40]

hi Hugh...
Natural People and natural portrai.
very nice.
tfs
Haldian

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• rokoslav (1829)
• [2007-05-07 15:24]
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Rew is probably right. But I love the shot. The atmosphere is perfect. Reminds me of Dalmatia.

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• microearte (0)
• [2007-05-10 8:46]

Olá Hugh,

Uma linda menina e uma fotografia com muita sensibilidade sua.
Parabéns.
Sergio

:) amanhã.