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introducing Zelma


introducing Zelma
Photo Information
Copyright: Bruno Camolez (kmolz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 87 W: 53 N: 228] (1157)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, 18-55mm EF-S Lens, Compact Flash Card
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Favorites: Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-05 10:06
Viewed: 1357
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is Zelma. She was modeling to our class. I'm doing a 4 months photo course, and now we've reached the studio shooting part, we're studying light and so on...
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2005-04-05 11:53]
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Lucky you to be able to play with studio loght Bruno. How is the class going? Well i hope and i hope you are having bundles of fun. Great intence pose, to bad you missed teh corner of the elbow but it is not very distracting, Just a nit pick. The light is well set up as well, to have the tones on her body enhance the muscles.

What a great opportunity to be able use the studio in your class. The lighting is excellent. I like he way the light shows the movement in her muscles. Perhaps just a little overexposed part on her forehead. Good luck with your lessons.

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-04-05 15:11]
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I think the lighting is very good on this shot Bruno. I don't see any harsh shadows, I like her pose, and you better not mess with her or she will punch your lights out! Mind telling us how this was lit? B

Hi Bruno...I like the lighting here...Especially, the harmony between tones is great...Excellent work...

Can

Unusually attractive portrait of a women but technically well captured. Composition, lighting and focus very well done. Would like to give you maximum points but the scoring buttons are missing (first time this has happened).

Hi Bruno,
all being said. I just want to add that I would like to see just her head and the back without the fists and arms. I find those kind of distracting. Would have been a wonderful bust otherwise. Yours, Jan
P.S.: Please tell more about your photography class.

wow great one !
What kind of (and how many) light sources have been used ? (at least 2 it seems)

Bravo !

Excelente, Bruno !
O estudio favorece mas realmente é o olho do fotografo antes mesmo da beleza da Zelma.
Diz BRAVO para ela também ! Que olhar !

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  • freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 329 W: 54 N: 77] (1909)
  • [2005-05-25 20:35]

the texture on the skin is very amazing. Very sharp portrait with a lot of character. Well done!

Bonjour Bruno
Très belle lumière

Amicalement
Sylvain

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1348 W: 0 N: 1642] (13380)
  • [2008-01-27 11:40]

Great job Bruno,what a superwoman!
jan

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2670 W: 1567 N: 5137] (18585)
  • [2008-11-05 16:19]

Olá Bruno,

Excelente retrato dessa linda modelo1
Uma verdadeira aula de fotografia!
Parabéns e grande abraço,
Sergio

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