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getting there...


getting there...
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Copyright: Bruno Camolez (kmolz) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 87 W: 53 N: 228] (1157)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Canon EOS 20D
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Body Parts [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-05-28 9:48
Viewed: 1070
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I've been practicing eye shot for a while now, and somehow, I can feel some improvement. I am quite satisfied with this one, we can even see her eye lens... so, I'm getting there...

what did Picasso say? something like 10% talent and 90% effort/practice, well he was absolutely right.

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Hi Bruno, yep you've done a good job here with this close up, I particularly like the reflection in the eye.
Well done good macro shot.
::M::

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-05-28 11:06]

Defenatly getting there Bruno. This is really a close up. It is Really sharp too. Great refelction. I like how the eye lashes are reflected in the eye, like a curtain.

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  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 20 N: 139] (842)
  • [2004-05-28 11:13]

Great reflection and interesting experience. All togheter, it's very well done, very clear and sharp, well exposed... and very original.

great result bruno! and nice house you've got...lol

Hi Bruno , you've improved in this close up .Very , very nice. The light is so beautiful. There is just a medical problem . Why you take the photo with the "contact lens "?
Kisses , Nanda

Incrivel, Bruno, a nitidez (e a lente de contato) quase se pode ver você ao longe fotografando...."superbe"

Greatful macro ! Composition is excellent. Nice idea !

http://www.treklens.com/gallery/North_America/Canada/photo18480.htm

just for fun look at the link for a comparison, not that one is better or worse just to compare. I like the colors and the intensity on your pic. The eye seems to look right at me.

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  • Harma Gold Star Critiquer [C: 50 W: 8 N: 1] (181)
  • [2006-06-27 12:29]

Good idea ..
This fotohad like 2 dimensions, through the eye.
Furthermore it returns well the texture of the skin and the eye.

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