MY 200TH - ETERNO "TWISTED"

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MY 200TH - ETERNO
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Copyright: Sergio Fortuna (Fortuna) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1626 W: 805 N: 3230] (11795)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1971
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Artwork, Event, Decisive Moment, Abstract, Mood
Camera: Olympus Trip 35
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): PATY DO ALFERES, Friday Theme 2008/05/16 "Twisted" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-16 2:28
Viewed: 277
Points: 64
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
ETERNO
Carlos Drummond de Andrade

E como ficou chato ser moderno.
Agora serei eterno.

Eterno! Eterno!
O Padre Eterno,
a vida eterna,
o fogo eterno.

(Le silence éternel de ces espaces infinis m'effraie.)

— O que é eterno, Yayá Lindinha?
— Ingrato! é o amor que te tenho.

Eternalidade eternite eternaltivamente
................................eternuávamos
...................................eternissíssimo
A cada instante se criam novas categorias do eterno.

Eterna é a flor que se fana
se soube florir
é o menino recém-nascido
antes que lhe dêem nome
e lhe comuniquem o sentimento do efêmero
é o gesto de enlaçar e beijar
na visita do amor às almas
eterno é tudo aquilo que vive uma fração de segundo
mas com tamanha intensidade que se petrifica e nenhuma
........................................................[força o resgata
é minha mãe em mim que a estou pensando
de tanto que a perdi de não pensá-la
é o que se pensa em nós se estamos loucos
é tudo que passou, porque passou
é tudo que não passa, pois não houve
eternas as palavras, eternos os pensamentos;e
.......................................................[passageiras
as obras.
Eterno, mas até quando? é esse marulho em nós de um
.......................................................mar profundo.
Naufragamos sem praia; e na solidão dos botos
.......................................................[afundamos.
É tentação a vertigem; e também a pirueta dos ébrios.
Eternos! Eternos, miseravelmente.
O relógio no pulso é nosso confidente.

Mas eu não quero ser senão eterno.
Que os séculos apodreçam e não reste mais do que uma
.......................................................[essência
ou nem isso.

milas, kiwi_explorer, chrisJ, Teresat, zhelach, mesquens1, shelbeesmom, tsesler, Grzegorka, harpya, norenastramus, gnada, Silvio2006, Hendrika, Niva has marked this note useful
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Hi Sergio,

CONGRATS , DEAR FRIEND..200 IMAGES !!
A dreamy shot for the celebrations...
Wish you the best.

jp

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1460 W: 0 N: 164] (10999)
  • [2008-05-16 2:51]

Hi Sergio!
Congratulations for your 200th post!!!
Great composition with special colors and effect, it's beautiful and artistic. Thanks and have a nice day
Diane

Hi Sergio,
Nice formation of the tree against the clouds and sky. Good image quality and color saturation. Well captured and presented. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4018 W: 207 N: 3392] (26027)
  • [2008-05-16 3:06]

Hi Sergio

Congratulations on your 200th post! Good graphism, with attractive warm colors. Tfs!

Bom dia Sergio

It´s a beautiful and poetic way to celebrat so many so many photos and memories. Lovely and great composition.
O poema do grande poeta Carlos drummond de Andrade é fabuloso. Excelente reunião da sua imagem com estas palavras fabulosas que apetece ler e reler.
Parabéns.

Teresat

Hello Sergio!
Congratulations for your 200th photos! Great atmosphere! Wonderful colors and contrast!
Best wishes!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

Hello Sergio,
EXCELLENT COLORS, SHAPES AND LİGHT
GREAT 2000 IMAGES
CONGRATULATIONS...
Selahattin E

Duzentas imagens eternas, meu amigo e irmão.
A restauração, melhor dizendo, o resgate da belíssima foto estão magníficos.
Escusado falar do texto porque ele se qualifica por si, mas é importante destacar a propriedade dele para o suporte verbal da GRANDÍSSIMA foto.
Não cabem, hoje, parabéns, mas dizer que vou meditar sobre tudo isso.
Raimundo

Congratulations on your 200th Sergio!! Amazing what happens when we have life changes... OXEN??? HAHAHAHAHAHA! Still laughing.... Love this work, really nice twisties too!
B-)
Linda

Congratulations for your 200th post Sergio!
Best wishes
Aga

hi Sergio
congratulations!
your 200th is fantastically unique. very special presentation in amazing composition and colors.
compliments
tsilla

Hi My Dear Brother Sergio,
Firs of all, ı congratulated for your 200th.post...
You are every time GREAT about FRİENDSHİP....
Thanks for your good,perfect friendship.tfs.
Your Brother Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Have a nice weekand....:)))

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2032 W: 375 N: 2137] (21281)
  • [2008-05-16 8:51]

Merhaba my brother Dear Sergio.....
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful macro and a very beautiful shot.....
Selamlar...
Milas...

Hi Sergio..
Congratulations for your 200th post.
Excellent trees and beautiful idea.
Lovely colour and details of this theme.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings.
H.Ayhan

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1959 W: 59 N: 1893] (11851)
  • [2008-05-16 9:42]

Hi, hi...
Congratulations my dear friend on the 200-th photo...
And so many more superb postings including this one which is excellent...
Very nice note and interesting photo for the anniversary...
Greetings,
George

Hello dear friend
wow, Your 200 th post is realy original, great technique with different colours of sky, this colours look good together- grey and pink, excellent pov, naked tree with excellent light, interesting photo,
congratulation Sergio
Magda

Adorei o poema. A foto está uma beleza com o tema de eternidade lhe fazendo jus.
Abraços
Maria

Congrats on youtr 200!!!
Is been a pleasure to see everyday shots from you.

This one is perfect for the theme.
Exelent colors and...the sky is amazing.


sabina

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1197 W: 95 N: 1740] (6799)
  • [2008-05-16 22:20]

hi Sergio

Interesting color tone and a nice way to frame the branches with shades of grey, white and pink backdrop.

tfs, bill

Hello Sergio,
Congrats on #200!
A fine achievement with many great images, let them keep coming in the future too...
I like the naked branches against the sky, nice play of colours and the view is well framed!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Sergio,
hearty congratulations on your 200th post.Great contrıbution for the theme.Excellent colours and graphism.TFS.
Abraço,

hAyAti

Hola Sergio, congratulations for your splendid 200th post on TL, great fantasy of light and fantastic colors, wonderful composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 938 W: 39 N: 596] (10007)
  • [2008-05-17 0:39]

Hi Sergio,
congratulations for 200th post.Lovely compo.beautiful colours and nice framing.TFS.Necla.:)later.

hi sergio

congratulations for 200th post!!
great composition with good pov
amazing colors

best wishes!
jagroopsingh

nice shot of your twisted tree, Sergio.. with the sky looking fantastic with different colours on both side.. well done on the pp work too.. wonderful contribution to this week theme.

regards, terry

Hi Sergio,
Congratulations for your 200th post.
Very brilliant capture with incredible colors!
A very good composition. Thanks for sharing this.

Best regards,
Sharina

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4882 W: 177 N: 5546] (30173)
  • [2008-05-17 8:30]

Ola Sergio


1 - Parabens pelos 200 post!
2 - Eu te espero junto a mim.
3 - Maravilhoso visual e belas cores neste teu trabalho,
bonito e bem artistico.
Excelente post para comemorar este grande dia my friend....
Grande abraço

Sergio
:)-

Hello Segio,
what a shot, what an amazing colours, what a compo with perfect peresentation,
very welldone my friend and tfs,
regards,
Taner
:) tomorrow

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 54] (1042)
  • [2008-05-18 17:22]

Hi Sergio,
Congratulations for your 200th post!
Gorgeous shot !
Colors and sharpness superb.
Bravo!
Jasmine

Superb interpretation for the theme. Very nice.
Best wishes,
Achim

Congratulations Sergio,

200 already - how time flies when you are having fun.

Lovely colours in this picture.

TFS
Els

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 806 W: 0 N: 354] (5061)
  • [2008-07-06 7:01]

Esta eu havia perdido... Encontrei-a hoje ...
Um lindo abstrato, um lindo texto!
Parabéns Sérgio!
Grande abraço,
Nivaldo

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