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EDUARDA


EDUARDA
Photo Information
Copyright: Renato Zani (rrvzani) (104)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-17
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-31 19:20
Viewed: 586
Points: 3
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NIKON D 70S
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Not that great, i'm afraid.

If "EDUARDA" is the name of the model, she takes up too little of the scene and is too central. For model photography, in general you want to focus more on the subject, have less background. In this shot all the background clutter takes the attention.

More of a photographer's note would help us understand what you are trying to do.

Very good presentation, the shot is very well composed.
Congratulations.

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  • ub06 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 38 W: 0 N: 6] (202)
  • [2008-06-01 0:00]

nice shot feels so calm

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