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Time of innocence


Time of innocence
Photo Information
Copyright: Carmem A Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 71 N: 222] (2507)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-15
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/4.2, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): My hunt pictures. [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-05-26 0:33
Viewed: 1336
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
6th entry for the scav. hunt: Movie Poster.
I decided for just suggesting the movie poster idea by adding a title and the words "coming soon", for a cleaner result.
2 layers, one for children, sharpened and with a drop shadow blending.
Another for background, filtered with gaussian blur and adding noise.
Hope you like it!!!


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To nofer: see the workshop!!carmem_busko 2 06-03 23:39
To hojper: You´re absolutely right!!!carmem_busko 1 05-30 21:06
To nofer: Volta aqui!!carmem_busko 1 05-26 01:02
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I love it. :) what a beautiful, joyous mood you bring with this shot. colors and composition excellent. great job. thanks and I can't wait to see the flick!

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 272 N: 495] (1726)
  • [2005-05-26 0:46]
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Eeeehh.... você copiou.... He... He...
O detalhe do guarda-sol ficou ótimo!!
Muito bom! Parabéns.
Obrigado!
Reynaldo

nice photo and idea there for the movie poster.. those kids are nice.. and your photoshop works on the photo are nice too... but i dont like the font that you use.. they didnt looks outstanding on the photo..just my taste.. maybe other more 'commercial' fonts will do the tricks. nice day
-thong-

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  • cwong Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 14 N: 43] (332)
  • [2005-05-26 2:59]

Hello Carmem,
I think when you remove 'coming soon', it looks more like a book's cover and you are the author of it =)(Soon to become a movie, =)). I like the PP you did, great job on the composition and colour. Thanks for sharing it. Regards,
Cathy

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)
  • [2005-05-26 3:16]

Olá Carmen!
Bela composição!Optimas cores.
Também concordo com o "cwong" parece mais a capa de um livro escrito por si.
Belíssimo trabalho.
Fica bem,
Fernando

Que fofa essa foto Carmem.. gostei muito do foco no guarda-sol.. ficou bonito mesmo ;)
tb gostei do "coming soon.." hehe

Hi Carmen, as a shot of the boys, it's nice, and I like the work on the background (my favorite noise), but I think that as a poster it wouldn't work. haven't you ever noticed that you need to see at least one eye of a person - if there is a person in a poster. I think psychologically we refrain from someone who turns his back on us, even if it's two boys playing in a photo. Whereas eye contact draws us in and make us feel "wanted". So no viewers for this film, but the title is great - real Cannes material.

Nice entry for the scavenger hunt Carmen. Nice bright colours, and I love the umbrellas and the fact that the children are running.
I have the photo of the 'string tripod', just let me know if you want it.

De quoi donner le goût de retourner au monde de l'enfance......
Traitement tres efficace....et agréable pour la vue..
Merci!!
Claude

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  • capa Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 4 N: 9] (422)
  • [2005-06-01 14:24]

Bonita imagem ,bom aproveitamento das cores

I love the picture. It's very evocative of your movie title. Makes me want to be a kid again!

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