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My sister


My sister
Photo Information
Copyright: Jonathan Duriaux (Murmeli) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 29 W: 4 N: 5] (482)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-12-21
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: HP Photosmart 850
Exposure: f/2.8, 30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-14 5:36
Viewed: 855
Points: 10
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my sister
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  • Great 
  • hardy Silver Star Critiquer [C: 40 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-14 13:57]

Bonita ela é, só não tem cara de suíça, tem cara de brasileira. Acho que você deveria aproveitar melhor o fotograma. Tem muito espaço "vazio". Muita luminosidade no fundo e que tira a atenção.

  • Great 
  • GlenC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 2 N: 99] (787)
  • [2005-09-14 20:55]

The details of her face are nice. Her eyes are very pretty and you captured them well. I would try to blur out the background to make the focus more on her. Great shot though Jonathan. TFS,

Glen

Oh so yo have a brasilian sister!! this is nice, she looks lovely! hehee

Encore, vous devriez nous dire plus d'information de l'image !!

Vous avez une soeur brésilienne ! ! Est c'avant ce que j'allais dire lis le pays de cette image... Votre soeur regarde vraiment pour être une fille brésilienne. Très assez elle est... Quel âge a-t-elle ? ?

  • Great 
  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-09-22 12:26]

Very nice, sharp and good composition. I like the expression on her eyes the most.

Andre'

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