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| a little bit unfocused (unfocused in the end), and not trying to excuse, but it was my first model session and over all i was experimenting with light and learning how to use my new camera... |
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Hello Alejandro, you have a realy beautifull and artistic gallery of portraits, this one is very beautifull, good POV, nice soft colors and very beautifull model,
cheer,
friendly,
Pat
My suggestion is to sharpen the focus around the eyes and make the colors resemble skin tones. The model is nice and deserves a good presentation. Her eyes not on the camera are a good thing here. TFS.
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