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And the sun coming in ... II


And the sun coming in ... II
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Adolfo Segura (jafsc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-05
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Mood
Camera: Olympus OM4T
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-16 8:30
Viewed: 920
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Detail of light
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To lollie: Merci Stephanejafsc 1 08-03 11:48
To Werewolf: Les rayons de soleiljafsc 2 08-17 10:56
To Pamela: La nota :)jafsc 2 08-17 08:52
To law: Thank you Lawrencejafsc 1 08-17 03:16
To jerome63: Rayons transcendants !jafsc 1 08-17 03:09
To Saiz: Merci ! ;)jafsc 1 08-17 03:07
To delnaja: Thanks!jafsc 1 08-17 03:02
To ruudblok: candlesjafsc 1 08-17 03:00
To onurdongel: Thanks Onur!jafsc 1 08-17 02:56
To ciore: Thanks!jafsc 1 08-17 02:54
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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 783 W: 3 N: 108] (2309)
  • [2005-08-16 8:52]
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so !
now i see details of that red object!!!
yesterday at first it looks for me like something like imitacion of little building lol
thanks for part two,Jose.
yes, i like it,amzing, even lucky capture!
nice_
regards
v

Todo bien naturalmente compuesto. Me gusta el rojo aquí, le da un toque místico fuerte, extraño, aunque quizás no tenga nada que ver...
Buen detalle de la luz, de esos rayos extraños.
Una nota faltó, para saber precisamente de dónde es ese preciso sitio.
Saludos,
Pamela

hi Jose,
excellent photo..very nice composition and colours..well done

Onur

I think it’s a great photo. If possible the candles shoot burn

nice shoot, interesting colours. I love...

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-16 14:36]
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Et la Lumière Fut …
Et l'Olympus Prit …
Et José sourit …
Et Antonio dit merci …
°-[o

Sympa cette photo, la sobriété est souvent l'alliée d'une belle image. Et là c'est trés réussi, l'image est bien équilibrée et les rayons transcendent la photo.
Beau travail

C'est spécial! Le soleil devait se réfléter sur une surface assez irrégulière pour lancer des rayons ainsi composés... Et ces chandelles... Quel est ce truc? Un mer de lumière!?

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  • law Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
  • [2005-08-17 1:27]
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hi Jose,
Very nice capture. Good composition and colors. Good work!
Lawrence

I like it. The simplicity of the colours and the broken symmetry work well indeed. I might have cropped a bit lower at the top. I don't see the reason for including the top of the wall. But that is a very small detail.

hello jose,
ce détail donne une image abstraite d'un beau rendu, ces petites niches à bougies habillent très bien l'image
jp

Hi Jose, this photo came out of your random order and I think it is beautiful. Superb red that draw my attention! And the candles in the wall makes it a christmas photo :)

Great graphical photo, good close-up but maybe I would have cropped the top part of the wall?

Overall superb! Cheers, Yan

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  • romior Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 66 N: 128] (2584)
  • [2006-02-16 10:23]

Preciosa fotografia Jose Adolfo, al principio pensé que eran ventanas aunque me sorprendian las velas pero luego he leido tu explicacion del muro y es realmente bello que lo hayas captado, muy bonita la luz. Saludos

Salut José,
trés belle lumiere en effet. Bien vu. bravo.

Steph.

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