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Native Birds
Photo Information
Copyright: Alejandro Ramirez (alejoram73) (67)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-15
Categories: Event
Camera: Sony CyberShot DSC-H1
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/2000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): • Wong Favourites • [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-04-07 16:27
Viewed: 682
Points: 16
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To Angela_Martini: Holaalejoram73 1 04-17 16:01
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  • deryk (15)
  • [2006-04-07 16:39]

Good picture! I like the 4 birds with the 4 columns.

Hello Alejandro... I do like the pattern in the composition... Maybe I prefer the black and white version of this composition to make this pattern stronger... Great work...

Can

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  • ABunce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 166 W: 32 N: 60] (1277)
  • [2006-04-07 17:33]

I love the repition with the third bird just off. Great shot!

Annetta

I like the symmetry, brilliant colors and crisp images finish the photo. Well done, tfs.
Fran

Hello Alejandro, Excellent Composition! Very Good capture! The horizon is not quite level but that is easy to fix. If I were you I would do that fix and frame it.

Congratulation! Marie-José

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-04-08 0:40]

Very nice capture Alejandro! composition + mood + Graphism = Perfect!

And i found interesting numbers here ;)
4 + 4 + 3 + 1000000...... Means
4 birds + 4 IIII + 3 shadow + 1000000....Sand stone. Interesting shot & well done!

Wong

Hola Alejandro!
Bienvenido a TL!!! Bonita toma, aunque como menciono Marie Jose deberias enderezar la linea del horizonte y quitarle un poco de "ruido" a la imagen. Esto lo puedes hacer usando el programa "Corel Paint Shop Pro X", por aqui la mayoria de gente usa Photoshop, pero yo considero que Paint Shop Pro es mucho mas sencillo; una vez tengas el programa si quieres me mandas un mensaje por aqui y yo te indico como arreglarla es bien sencillo!
Por cierto, yo tambien soy colombiana!
Un abrazo,
Angela

Alejandro, increible composiciòn.
POV, DOF maravillosos.
Felicitaciones y gracias por compartir tus imagenes.

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