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laura


laura
Photo Information
Copyright: german arturo robayo (german) (11)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-18
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.4
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-05-20 15:40
Viewed: 863
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Una prueba a la modelo
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To Fernol: Laura's portraitgerman 1 05-21 16:37
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hola german arturo
bienbenido a tl

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  • p43n6 (151)
  • [2008-05-20 17:04]

hello german arturo! welcom to TL

beautiful model great smile!

regards

antonio

Welcome to TrekLens German

A pretty model. Nice use of lighting, it gives depth and dimension to the portrait.

Maybe you could consider a different composition, it is usually not ideal to place the subject in the middle of the frame. Maybe check out some of the very useful links about composition here!

Rew

interesante sonrisa.
Saludos y bienvenido!

Mauro

Hi German
Just to put Rew said into an example...
check the workshop..
TFS

I'd have put her to the right or left, German, rather than a 'passport' shot. Welcome to TL. Also, a bit of sharpening is in order as shown in the workshop by someone else.

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