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Guitar - Friday's HPP


Guitar - Friday's HPP
Photo Information
Copyright: Renato Tomasini (renatombat) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 111 W: 44 N: 26] (547)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-13
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2009/02/13 HPP [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-02-13 14:18
Viewed: 316
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My son and his guitar
Post processing with potoshop
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well done Renato, I absolutely love it!
would look more real if no shadow where his head is...
Jacline

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 505 W: 130 N: 948] (6938)
  • [2009-02-13 15:11]

Perfect image for this weeks theme Renato,probably a bit like his music, the frame is pretty cool, I also like the inclusion
of the music notes.To be a little picky I would suggest you clone out the head shadow & remove the red eye if you were planning in making this into a framed photograph for him.
TFS

Ron

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1382 W: 31 N: 3011] (12100)
  • [2009-02-14 7:37]

Hi Renato
Very good presentation, the photo of your son is great.
A handsome fellow who will soon be breaking hearts I am sure.

Just my two cents worth of critiquing.
The shadow of your son's face and hands is on the right which is the one from the photo. With the pp your shadows are down left on his arm and guitar when there should not be any( notice his shoulder and arm) and with the frame pointing left your shadow should also go left and not all around.

It does not take away from your presentation and being the HHP
I think you did a great job.
Dot

Hi Renato!
Great pp work!
beautiful portrait,with fine effect!
nicely precented!
Compliments and TFS
Kostas

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