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The flute


The flute
Photo Information
Copyright: George Grabarczyk (Polonaise) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 100 W: 33 N: 31] (390)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-09
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: CANON F1, Tamron 30-70/f2.2, Kodak 400
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-13 13:40
Viewed: 584
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Audience...


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If you have anything smart to say about this photo - then leave a word or two...

If you don't - you know what to do, eh?
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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3270 W: 270 N: 7711] (32868)
  • [2008-09-13 14:04]

Hello George.
Looking closely at your photo I realise that the flute player is real, and that the couple on the right must be a poster or photo.
Maybe a bit more light on the young lad face might have improved it.
But you have blended them well together as it is only the lines on the couple that give the show away.

TFS
Janice

PS I haven't said 'anything smart', and I hope my 'words or two' were better than me being 'silent'???

Cze Jerzy!

kreatywna robota z manipulacja tutaj..
ciekawa kompozycja i kontrastowi ludzie na niej..
Dobrze zrobione!
POzdro z Italii..
Ania

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3288 W: 786 N: 4406] (19796)
  • [2008-09-13 20:40]

Hi Georges,
Well, your audience needs bravery to comment your photo after having read your note! But I will try to be a brave girl! :)

This B&W remembers me a tale of my childhood: the flute player of Hamelim. And I think that this young musician wants perhaps to throw a fate to these dubitative skinheads looking at him through the poster. It is the connotative part of my comment.

For the objective ones, I can say that you have an excellent POV, with the musician in front of the poster. The interaction seems obvious! The composition presents a beautiful plays of diagonal lines and interesting textures. The black and white is nicely appropriated for emphasizing the contrast between naivety and roughness in the differents expressions.

My compliments!
Annie

Hi George
Great composition in Your great style.Superb effect.
Take care my friend
Cheers
J.Diogo

ps:I've one for You

Exactly very professional work with very strong matter!

Greetings from Holland,
Edward

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  • miszka (0)
  • [2008-12-18 2:46]
  • [+]

Jak sobie poogladam Twoje fotki to mi sie pieprzy w glowie i wtedy czuje sie lepiej :).
pozdr. maciek

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