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Local Men - Taquille Island


Local Men - Taquille Island
Photo Information
Copyright: Zoe Basrak (zoeb) (59)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-31
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-10-04 15:03
Viewed: 697
Points: 4
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Hello Zoe,
I think your contribution here has many good qualities, I mention a few... interesting interaction between your subjects, the setting itself, good sharpness and colours. My objection is about the composition, the placement of the two guys makes your picture a bit static... To show you what I mean I did a very basic workshop with a different cropping, take a look and let me know what you think! And welcome to TL... it's a nice place to be and I'm sure you'll have a lot of fun here!
Regards,
Pablo -

Hi Zoe... sorry I missed your first post on TL (so Welcome :D ) ... good shot, I like the compo in it : this sort of symmerty made by the two men is great... Nice first photo :) Well done.
FRed

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