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Dawn 1


Dawn 1
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Copyright: Mario Celan (celan_mario) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 123 W: 0 N: 119] (981)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-18
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-18 22:00
Viewed: 494
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It was from the window of my home, about 6 am
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Hi Mario,

Very nice sunrise. The clouds give the shot good colouration. And the trees make the silhouette very interesting. The silhouette is also nice and crisp.

I would crop some of the top to move the right side onf the hill away from the middle.

Thanks for sharing
Johann

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5752 W: 198 N: 2563] (10054)
  • [2006-07-26 10:21]

Hi Mario,

The first picture that I come to seek us
albums are these, they are my favorite ones.
beautiful composition, big visual!
Congratulations

Sérgio

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