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the local train


the local train
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Copyright: willy rachmat (wr1611) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 7 N: 19] (187)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-07-04
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS 10D, Sigma 18-50
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1000 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-30 10:38
Viewed: 995
Points: 6
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  • Great 
  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2004-08-30 19:43]

Willy this has great lines. You could consider cropping out the lady on the right and adding some contrast.

This is a great shot Willy, I do agree though it could use a little contrast.

  • Great 
  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2005-01-01 15:38]

Special the framing in this one is so well done.
But the picture makes the mood and spirrit.
Let it roll.
Nice, greets torr

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