Waiting for the train

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Waiting for the train
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Copyright: Lucio Red (Redrubin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 9 N: 598] (4648)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-20
Categories: Transportation
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-23 10:18
Viewed: 515
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
S13 the train from Koln station to airport.
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Ah! This is the train we took last in our trip! I recognize it first glace! Yes S13 is the number. But it was nite we were there:)
Actually its a good shot with composition and the POV but the bag on left is disturbing.
Elif

I love the color and lighting of this photo and the way you have composed it with the correct interesting angle. I took the train from near Val Senales Italy to Florence and from Florence back to Modena (to see the Ferarri Museum) last year after a business meeting I attended in Val Senales. We don't have such good access to trains here, it is a lot more difficult to travel from one area to another. I really appreciate the good transit system in Europe.

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 37 N: 105] (867)
  • [2006-02-14 11:16]

This is nice, Lucio. I like those perspective photo. Probably I'd have cloned out that big sports bag on left, but otherwise your photo here is great!
btw, I added a small workshop, a bit of b&w. hope you'll like it.

bonjiorno!!
the clock here hold all the detail together with the concept of trains being scheduled
the eye is taken then straight to the train which then leads the eye to the centre and the B sign...altogether well composed with the arched roof holding down the whole shot...
the duffel bag could be cloned out..so establishing a line of clear platform
excellent tableau of life
thanks
geof

Hi Redrubin! Wow! Wonderful POV, amazing train, original light. Very good dynamic take.
Cheers!

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  • Anna- Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 1 N: 13] (615)
  • [2008-02-24 13:21]
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Ciao Lucio,
mi piacciono le foto prese nelle stazioni. Otiima prospettiva e colori.
Buona serata
Anna

Dear Lucio Red!
Very interesting picture.
Good capture.
Nice light and colors.
TFS!

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