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Copyright: Karen Williamson (dorisday) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 53 N: 145] (2039)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS 3000, 28-80
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-14 4:04
Viewed: 587
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Look here
Look at me.

Bronze sculpture in the park at Rotorua, a Maori man, face tatooed, eyes piercing. Looking at you.
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To ron-franklin: workshopdorisday 1 02-14 20:56
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excellent crop and lighting...
all details are clear..and those eye slots...
fantastic

Good tuesday mornin ( from here ) oooooo now we are talkin.....this picture just grabs you, in fact it quite scares me, but then again that was probabily its original propose.....lol....great pov lookin up at the face gives the impression that you are smaller, more feble. Lighting great, only nit pick.. I would have cropped that small piece of sky top right. Anyway great shot..

Ron

Ps I am so so tempted to do a workshop on this but I dont think I will have time. we will see

PPs Let me Know what Su thinks of my last workshop love to know .... :-)

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3283 W: 268 N: 7782] (33214)
  • [2006-02-14 4:55]

HI Karen, it is a super sculpture, and your cropping shows it off perfectly. Well done,
Janice

This is great Karen - I've been there too!! How funny!
You could burn the lit part in PS a bit to even out the light maybe??
Great shot
Caroline

And suddenly the song of Rockwell said: I wanna fell bad... Somebody's watching me!

That mask is great! I would like to have it just on the wall at the head of my bed :)
The details surprising me. I didn't see before mask with wrinting on the face.. I like it!

My, I have missed quite a few. This is worth calling by for. Remarkably good in many respects. Really good hard crop (you and I are similar thinkers on that score). The tilted eyeline is just right and the side-lighting did you a lot of favours.
Well-presented and a really superb subject.

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