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Eda


Eda
Photo Information
Copyright: Burak Kocak (Kocak) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 38 W: 34 N: 4] (298)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-02-20
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon Powershot A610
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/8 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): A Beautiful Child [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-02-20 6:45
Viewed: 769
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
she is my sister Eda. i use portrait mode in this shot. And add lens blur in PS.

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To efrosini: tesekkurlerKocak 1 12-16 05:31
To eliferen: Merhaba ElifKocak 5 02-28 07:01
To LunaSun: MerciKocak 1 02-26 15:22
To kondor: HiKocak 1 02-24 07:07
To ben-u-ron: hi CarlaKocak 1 02-20 16:58
To reddevil: Yes! canon is betterKocak 1 02-20 15:32
To denizler: MerhabaKocak 1 02-20 11:11
To persimon: HiKocak 1 02-20 11:07
To seven: Thanks TetKocak 1 02-20 11:06
To ropetko: ThanksKocak 1 02-20 11:00
To neverlandkids: Thank youKocak 1 02-20 08:40
To cstathoulis: Thank YouKocak 1 02-20 08:29
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Hi Burak
her expression and pose is really cute.

Hi Burak,

Your sister is so sweet! She has a beautiful pose and oyu've made a wonderful portrait.
I was curious to see this a little bit warmer, so I made a WS. I hope you don't mind. :)
Great work!
Constantinos

End you did a very good job here! She is perhaps too blurred (I usually don't blur eyes and lips) but is still a cutie and you did a great portrait, congratulations for both of you!
Actually, what is most amazing is the composition, and her hands that lead our look up to her eyes - beautiful! And she didn't distort her face by leaning onto a palm, which usually distors face a lot.
Really good portrait, TFS!
Robert

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  • tet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 39 N: 196] (3625)
  • [2006-02-20 9:16]
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Cute kid Burak! Lovely eyes indeed!

tfs,
tet

Selamlar,
Guzel bir siyah&beyaz calisma!Ama o sevimli mankenin de hakkini yememek lazim:)Cok sirin!!Tebrikler.
Deniz.

What a beautiful little girl. I love her expression and the light you capture in her eyes.

What a wonderful photo Burak of your sister I like the soft light and the B&W you used...a new camera Burak ;-) good choice a Canon.
Görüsmek üzere,

Jos

She's lovely!
Great shot with a great model!

Regards,
Carla

A nice softfocus image with good tonal balance, however, the BG is a little distracting to my liking and the hands are too obvious. When including hands, try to minimise them in the image, as they always draw a lot of attention (away from the face).

Merhaba Burak. You did a good job! I like Eda's face expression and pose a lot. And you took so well. And B&W tones looks so nice and soft here. Tebrik ederim cok guzel bir portre calismasi olmus.
Elif

Tendre et sensible, Bravo.

Selamlar Burak Bey
Çok güzel bir portre calışması cıkartmışsınız Paylaşımınız için teşekkürler. Ancak güzel mankeniniz de bir alkışı hak ediyor :)
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