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Mane
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Copyright: Karey Walker (Karey) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 83 W: 15 N: 67] (775)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-05
Categories: Experimental
Exposure: f/3.6, 1/21 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-03-05 1:03
Viewed: 750
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is an idea I have wanted to try -experimenting with tumbling hair. My daughter had a friend around so we did some playing. She is lying on a 'bed' covered with black velvet and a blanket of black over her body. This has been cropped, the colours adjusted and some cloning done in the black areas. I wonder if she looks a little disembodied?
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To JohnTulip: ManeKarey 1 03-12 04:27
To ballyna: Mane - your workshop.Karey 2 03-08 10:32
To Patricia: ManeKarey 1 03-07 19:51
To Janice: ManeKarey 1 03-05 03:52
To andtine: ManeKarey 1 03-05 01:38
To sangeeth_sg: ManeKarey 1 03-05 01:33
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good experiemnt n tight crop.
well done

sangeeth

I can see what you were trying to do here, but unfortunately as the blanket is very obvious a blanket it just looks like she is lying under covers and not disembodied. I have done a workshop to show how the effect you are after can be boosted. I hope it helps

Andrew

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2006-03-05 2:37]

Amasing good shot.
And model.

The unnatural pose is taken the right way.
Impressive and inspiraring!
Try out some one of these days.
Kurt
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Good job, and I like Andrew's WS Karey. I keep thinking that I would like your young model to have some make-up / mascara under her eyes. She has beautiful hair and is very attractive too. Good experiment, well done...
Janice

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2006-03-05 4:44]

very nice played Karey.
ant for me it is more natural than de workshot andre made.

karey,
an original idea and a good experiment.I prepared a ws for that,hope u like it.
regards

Excellent shot Karey. Also like the examples given in the two workshops.

Nice shot (have 2 hairsalons)
Well done and greetings from Holland
John

nice play..

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 71 N: 645] (4306)
  • [2006-03-17 7:42]

Wonderfull photo ot a beutifull little blond lady! Karey, your photo is a top aestetic achievement!
Anton

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