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- dada
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(6560) - [2006-03-21 17:30]
Hi Marcis! first: welcome to TL and have fun!
this is a really a great start here, beautiful decisive moment shot, and the compo is just great! congratulations! only that the pic has to be straighteened, that's all:)
tfs
anca
Hi Marcis,
Another good b/w shot here. You have really captured the moment here. Good composition too.
I did a very quick little workshop for you. Hope you like it.
Well done
Jako
- surfacing
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(0) - [2006-03-24 15:40]
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- edal
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(4306) - [2006-05-05 16:47]
Hi, Marcis! Three portraits, three different detinies. Three different directions of thinking. Even the couple is separated by different intersts. A very good picture of our alienation...
TFS
Anton
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Hi Marcis,
when checking thumbnails, this photo attracted my attention - it matched the title. When I opened it, I found that you had quite nice idea, but execution imho failed a bit. Why? Well, this is about bus stop. I assumed you wanted me to concentrate on the people waiting there. Instead the most noticeable object here are the doors. Besides leaning of the photo disturbs in it's reception. You have left on the right the dark strap (another doors?) - it looks not too good. I made the workshop correcting this - I think that after few changes I did the viewer can concentrate more on these 3 persons. Let me know what do you think of it.
Marek