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spring weather
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Copyright: Hakan Aslan (sarissa) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 88 N: 106] (1566)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-23
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: nikon coolpix 4500
Exposure: f/5.6, 30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-26 10:46
Viewed: 431
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
POEM WITH A FLUTTER

One morning I woke up and found
The sun right in my heart,
And I was fluttering
Like birds and leaves in the spring wind,
All my limbs in an uproar.
I'm like birds and leaves now,

Like birds
And leaves.

Orhan Veli Kanık

Kanık, more often referred to as Orhan Veli, was the leading modernist in Turkish poetry in the 1940's. Few literary upheavals have had an impact comparable to that produced by the stylistic and substantive innovations he made in Turkish poetry, a tradition which dates back to the 8th century A.D. (Even earlier references in Chinese sources allude to translations from Turkish poetry in the 2nd century B.C.) Within the decade or so that spanned his career, Orhan Veli revolutionized not only the form and content but also the function of Turkish poetry.

PS. The flower is names Capparis ovata.
Just croped
add border and framed
eliferen, pranab, Tintin, mugush, pompey, Valy67, pablominto, YasminesDad, dodo, baslan has marked this note useful
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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2006-03-26 11:50]

you always come up with new ideas..i like this shot..what a nice colors and wonderfull compositioin
thanks for sharing
love
mugush

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  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 156 N: 601] (8415)
  • [2006-03-26 13:17]

Nice work Hakan, nice tight crop, beautiful colours and lovely frame.
Thanks for sharing.
Michael.

Merhaba Hakan.
Temiz ve guzel bir yakin cekim (makro) fotografi olmus, tebrik ederim.
Renkler ve netlik cok iyi.
Ingilizcem cok iyi olmasa da aciklama kismindaki Orhan Veli Kanik'tan bahsetmissin hosuma gitti.
Paylastigin icin tesekkurler.
Son zamanlarda hic karsilasamiyoruz, gorusmek dilegiyle.
Saygi ve selamlar.

[YaSiN]

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-03-26 17:51]

Beautifully done, Hakan. I like these very close cropped view of flowers. Nice choice of DOF in a good composition with great colours. Everything to make a very beautiful picture. Well done!

Hello Hakan, well executed macro shot, good colours and sharpness, tfs
Alaettin

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  • pranab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 0 N: 537] (3141)
  • [2006-03-26 23:58]

hakan,
nice macro shot with good details and nice warm colors to welcome spring. good use of light here.

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  • sufi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 720 W: 7 N: 106] (1336)
  • [2006-03-27 6:32]

Merhaba Hakan Baba...
Yine beni hic sasirtmayan mükemmel bir yakin plan cekim ve kompozisyon... Ayrintilar ve netlik mükemmel...
Renklere gelince sari-lacivert olsa daha iyi olmaz miydi? :)...
Saglicakla kal..
Salim.

Great macro work Hakan. Lovely colot tones, good eyepleasuring composition. Poetic :)Tebrikler
Elif

Love these spring shots. :) The composition is great, and the colors are lovely even though they seem just a bit darker than they should be.

Excellent macro, sharp enough and rich colours

jaco

The heart of a flower... Wonderful macro, with so much details, and so beautiful colors ! It's a real pleasure to look at.
Valerie.

Hello Hakan...
A pleasant macro in great colours!
Very well captured in a delicate presentation,
pleasing composition with good details where details should be... Artistic work!
Regards,
Pablo -

Hello Hakan,

What wonderful warm colours you have achieved here. Nice composition, good macro work and nice framing.

Kindest regards
Wayne

PS: Points to come, I'm out of smilies!

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-04-08 11:42]

Hi Hakan.
This is a beautiful macro shot. The colors are very appealing, they are si rich, so vivid!
Thank you for bringing spring among us with such a lovely composition.
Congratulations.
Luci

Merhaba Hakan,
Tek kelimeyle muhtesem bir macro calisma olmus.
Renkler,netlik,not,siir,derinlik,isik ve cerceve super.Eline Saglik.TFS
YD

Merhaba Hakan...
Çok güzel bir çekim... Her zamanki gibi özenmişsin. Tebrikler.

Bülent.

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