The Queen

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• Riz (523)
• [2004-10-02 9:32]

Welcome to TrekLens, Peter!
i like the detail in this shot and the color of the chess pieces and the lighting I like on thing I don't like the queen as 'centered' as much as she if your dof was a little more deep then maybe I might have put tried to put the queen in the image where your bishop next to king is so the image focal point is in rule of thirds.
good 1st post here on TL, looking forward into what else you have to offer to this site.

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• davidao25 (159)
• [2004-10-02 10:20]
• - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Peter and Welcome to TL

A very good macro on the queen. I like the fact that all the other pieces are blured.
I've made a workshop

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• TheZubial (3723)
• [2004-10-02 16:23]

Pas mal fait du tout ça!
Bienvenue sur TL Peter

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• carmem_busko (2507)
• [2004-10-02 18:52]

wellcome to TL!!
Very well done macro. I agree with Riz words, anyway, a good start.
Carmem

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• kiscool (1427)
• [2004-10-03 14:11]

Very nice wood warm color... Good compo and perspectiv... Well done !

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2004-10-10 16:55]

An excellent DoF Peter, welcome to TL. I like David's WS too, but your shallow DoF does the trick as well, I prefer your original version...

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• egerie (1968)
• [2004-10-12 0:11]

Très bon choix de sujet. Excellent focus sur le roi et la reine... Photo bien exécutée...
Bonne semaine
Gisèle