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Candle


Candle
Photo Information
Copyright: Paulo Fonseca (bpaf) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 6 N: 5] (202)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-06
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony DSC F-717
Exposure: f/2, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-10-11 11:58
Viewed: 676
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
This photo was taken off in the part highest of the mount of "Sra. da Graça" surrounds 1000 meters of height.
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To olivier: Olivierbpaf 1 10-12 11:49
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I really like the textures and light of your shot, and the harmony between the 2 candles. But i think the cropping could be some closer to the candles to get a more interesting composition, with the candles not in the middle of the picture and a bit less of surroundings. I did a workshop to show what i mean, hope you'll like it.

Paulo,

nice composition & wonderful exposure of what would've been a dark picture. Good job and thanks for posting!

Cheers,
Yah Wen

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  • zoe Silver Star Critiquer [C: 41 W: 0 N: 7] (168)
  • [2004-12-26 16:56]

Transmite muito bem um ar de abandono, de desgraça, sem deixar de ser uma bonita foto. Parabéns
Um abraço

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