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Cindy y Maria


Cindy y Maria
Photo Information
Copyright: Edimir Baldayo (ebaldayo) (67)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-27
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Canon 17-85mm IS USM, B+W 58mm UV
Exposure: f/22, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-05-05 10:25
Viewed: 859
Points: 2
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Mis dos sobrinas
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To perryhooter: Excelent work!ebaldayo 1 05-11 14:38
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Hello Edimir!

Lovely smiles here. But there is something wrong with your composition. Tonight I can not post my WS , but it will follow tomorrow.

You should not put your subject's face against the frame, specially if you have another model with her. Space must be left in front of her.

The sea behind them is also not necessary for this one..

Back with more soon....
Keep on shooting and submitting! With practice , you can only improve!
Cheers!
Robert

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