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#Untitled Potrait No.1


#Untitled Potrait No.1
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Copyright: Boniangga Anugrah (BonBon) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 4 N: 19] (401)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-14
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL, Canon 18-55 mm f/3.5-5.6 USM, Compact Flash 2G, UV
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-13 19:25
Viewed: 617
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi guys, I just returned from my trip to Llandudno, Wales. A bit dissapoionted though for it was raining and foggy, well in the end the sun suddenly appeared so I can delegately say happy ending. Anyway this potrait was taken just a few hours ago in front of the Llandudno beach, I'm still doing experiment with tones, this time I try my BW style with a hint of red to create the misty feeling. if you guys like it I might use it for my mate's pre-wedding photoshoot, so looking forward to hear your feedback.
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Hello. Very nice portrait. Good prespective. She has a beautiful smile... Well done. :O)

it's a very good portrait...

Cheers,
Agata

Hello,
Very nice....great composition and lighting. Well done!
Cheers,
Mo

The tone is nice ! I like her look, mouth is smiling but the eyes seem melancholy. Pretty she is. Why don't you try playing around with the duotones feature of Photoshop? You'll get interesting tones from there. The image has to be grayscale for the duotone function to work. TFS and happy mom's day !

great portrait here... nice focus. she has wonderfully soft eyes and a gentle face. well done with detail and composition. well done!!

Good crop, great details, nice B/W. Well done BonBon!

Very attractive!
But I'm not quite sure what I am talking about..?
Well composed, dynamic framing!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Nice tight crop, and the hair framing the top left of the image, brilliant! Tonal range is very good and a good control of the DOF. Excellent job!

I like these kind of photography. I think tight crops work well with portraits. May be an interesting frame will add more impact. black and white with slight tone is always good as well. Good work.

  • Great 
  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-05-14 12:32]

Very creative portrait, Boniangga. I like the very tight crop you use to show only half of your friend's face and her hair in the wind is a nice addition. I do like this reddish tone. Well done!

nice potrait.i like when you see just the half of the face.thanks for this great shot boniangga.mephistoo

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  • bebeM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 0 N: 57] (605)
  • [2006-05-19 10:16]

It's beautiful, the crop, the slight tone, the hair in the wind, the whole expression. Go on, use it for what you have to do! :)
Bebe

Nice candid shot. I like where you only show half of her face. I also like the B&W with the red tones, makes her look a little softer. The smile and the eye really stand out. Overall a good shot. I do have one negative... there are spots of some kind all around her eye. If you could clean that up it would be even better.

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